everybody please read my poem now!
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Thread Topic: everybody please read my poem now!
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Autumn:
I remember playing in the golden colored fields as a little girl
With the beautiful pine tree that I've tried to climb
All of the laughs
Even the times I got hurt I loved it.
The sweet, gushing river flowed right in the middle of the fields
And then came the day I moved. I was only 6. But now I am 12 and visiting all of the beautiful, humorous memories made there. When I stopped there. I was shocked and in horror. The beautiful field was gone. The beautiful river was gone. And they were removed for another Walmart. The tears came down. Those memories from autumn were meaningless now. As the salty tears hit my face I then stopped and looked up and laughed. The tree was still there. -
Hmm... it's good. Painted a picture in my mind.
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Awesome, Kiks.
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thnx :D
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that pissed me off because it describes how i feel about the industry.
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oh... srry it made u pissed D:
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that's a good thing though, it's supposed to instill emotion, when it makes someone feel something, that means you did something right :)
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thnx :D
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aaww thats sweat and sour right there
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:D thnx.
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I love trees. ^.^
Although it made me feel like bawling. Poor tree lost its home. D: -
I didn[t really see it as a poem, to be honest :/
More of a poetic story, bt not exactly a poem. -
nakita: oh... dat sux!
nikki: okay.....
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