Some Poems...
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Gone[/]
The spoken words cut deep,
The unspoken words cut even deeper,
Clear enough to be heard but not seen,
The blood gone, the wound forever present
The tears are halted,
The tears fallen are erased,
Buried in sorrow, and shame and disgrace;
They will rise up,
A ghost in the night
The doubt; an eternal rain
The pain; a shard of glass
The anger; a bellowing of thunder
The dark lies, hidden in the light
The darkness, the eyes and ears of the truth
The remembrance is vague,
The search hollow,
The loss is forever lost
Seen in the shallow waters,
Seen in thy reflection,
Seen by the loved one,
But I still have not seen,
For I am blinded,
For I am gone
-[i]Leah -
i like it. its really good
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I like it.
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sad, very sad but good
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Wow, that reminds me of this story I'm writing... :) Very sad and emotional. I like it.
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Thank you all!
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cookiemonster2 Newbiei like this poem it puts a smile on my face
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Amazing. Really, just amazing. When I write, I just look for rhyming words but this...
Deep meaning. It rings strong. It's...memorable. Really, well done, Leah.
That was beautiful. -
I would really love to think you aren't just saying all these lovely things. :)
Thank you ever so much. :) -
I possessed such strength to be strong,
Such courage to overcome,
Such hope in doubt
For now it is diminished,
Ripped, eaten raw
By false words,
False strength,
False hope
Still alive in the light, but rottening in the dark
I have not yet met my ending,
Their ending
I have sown,
And I have reaped
My sown cannot go any further -
kyle87 Newbiei liked it i think it is very good
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Thanks Kyle! :)
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