a short peom i wrote

Thread Topic: a short peom i wrote

Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

water falls from the skies, like tears from my eyes,
life has its little twists, like the smell of blood from my wrists,
a knife through my heart, all of this shall NEVER tears us apart.
madid Junior

13 years ago

Woah
Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

what?
DeathObsession Newbie

13 years ago

I like it
Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

thank i wrote it
DeathObsession Newbie

13 years ago

brings back some memories....
Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

@death good or bad
DeathObsession Newbie

13 years ago

Both I guess
Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

oh ok then
fireprincess1996 Junior

13 years ago

Its good...I can relate to it..
LeahM Novice

13 years ago

Truly breathe-taking. You know for certain when you can express such powerful, sincere emotion in such brief sentences that you are truly gifted. Well done. :)
Jillpaige15 Newbie

13 years ago

thanks leah it means alot to me

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