Story idea
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Thread Topic: Story idea
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The main charrie: MC for short is going through an inititiation process for becoming a man in a male-dominated society. They learn to hate, be sexist, fight, and be cruel in general. One of the challenges is to work in the torture house for a few months. They torture criminals, prisoners etc. Among them is an elven woman, immortal (the kind that can't be killed, they'll regenerate). MC has been the number one initiate until now, in the torture house, where it causes him great stress to inflict pain upon the innocent (since most of the 'criminals' did nothing wrong). Once he's introduced to the elf, which everyone must inflict as much pain as possible on, or else they'll fail the final test, he becomes transfixed by her, not wanting to hurt her. He and the elf attempt to escape. They might succeed they might not.
Now, I have 3 questions for whoever read that: good or not? Should they fall in love? Should they escape? -
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eh, no. Tragic love stories rule.:3 -
Thanks!
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good
yes
i think they both should die in some way....whut?
if you're going to write it, write it in a way that's unexpected and grabs the readers attention, hell i'd read this. -
Cool! So they'll fall in love, then somehow they'll die...okay!
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not at the same time though, have like one of them die first, then have some unexpected s--- happen, then the other person dies after doing something epic
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Kk! Hmmm....which one should die first...I think it should be the elf...or MC could die, leaving the elf heartbroken and alive for eternity in despair...or I could be merciful and kill her too....
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whatever you choose. just don't make it too predictable
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Predictable is never good.
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Nope
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Never.
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good!
yesh.
no, they should die in eachother's arms :3 -
@ Alana: awww! That's so romantic!
I was thinking maybe he could sacrifice himself to let her go free and then she could make an appearance in a later story or something. Is that too cheesy? -
^^ i write a lot of romantic tragedies...
no, i think that's good. suspenseful, romantic, and a great plot twister. :) -
Hmm. I think that the dude should turn ut to be a wimp and he sells her out. And then she kills him, then says what have I done.
Or they trick her into THINKING he betrayed her.
Or she accidentally kills him.
But I think she should kill him, then be in remorse. Then kill herself. Or maybe just learn to endure. She starts to feel better. It's getting happier. She finds a purpose to live. Then you kill her. :) epic.
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