Writing a Story and would love Co-Authors!
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And this is where I run out of ideas too.
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*sorry James Thompson was the best bully name I could come up with feel free to change it
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u don’t need to use this if u want to u can just make another paragraph to replace it
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(Continuing on)The very very worst part about this is that Maddie’s BF,Carson,is also around,and he looks kinda angry.
“Pat?YOU like Maddie?” He says,a bit gruffly.Carson is one of the jocks at school and incredibly muscular,and I never want to be on his bad side.He can throw a football incredibly hard.
I just can’t take it.I let all of the tears out,and race out of the school.Lunch hour is long.I can leave,take a long,calming walk around the woods,make myself some calming tea,and be back to not be in trouble.
As I walk through the woods,I cry my heart out.Maddie is my bestie,and I might have destroyed our relationship.Suddenly,I stumble upon an old treehouse.Miss/Mrs/Ms Hitchson(I dunno are we supposed to use Miss Hitchson or are we supposed to make up another person)is sitting on a rocking chair,next to a ladder.She calls out,”What’s wrong,dear?What’s wrong?” I blurt out all of the things that are wrong,about my secret crush on Maddie being found out.
Miss Hitchson invites me into her house,where she gives age a mug of hot,steaming tea and lets me vent about everything that went wrong.After that,I start feeling a little bit drowsy and lie on the couch for a bit.I still have time for a nap.
When I wake up,I’m in my own bed again.I start thinking,”Maybe it’s just a bad dream.Maybe it’s not real.” -
Ran outta ideas again lol but what I was thinking was that she has a nap at the neighbour’s and then she wakes up in the alternate timeline
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ACK ACK I mean Mrs Hitcher
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(So the only problem I have is that since Pat's Diary went missing, I was thinking her brother could've stolen it and gave it to James Thompson.)
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(Oh yeah,that kinda makes sense)
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(Okay,here’s an edited version of the the paragraph with Patricia being exposed,I made a few edits)
As I walk to class,the gears in my head began whirring.What if I am the one who received my letter early?After all…I did get the letter when J was 17 and it did say that my soulmate didn’t exist!
After school,when I walk to my locker to get my backpack,my jaw drops in shock.My locker was already open and the school bully,James Thompson,holds my diary.How did he get that?Oh,hell no,it can’t be.MATTHEW?!
Sure enough,Matthew is standing right beside James,but the thing was,he isn’t happy.He’s burying his head in his hands,and when I asked,”Matthew!How could you?!” he just ran off.
“Look who’s here!” James cackled wickedly.”Little miss crush-on-Maddie!You know she’ll never like you back,she’s the most popular girl in the school and with your limited popularity you’ll never even get a fraction of the way there!” He began reading my diary out loud in the most obnoxiously simpering voice possible.”Dear Diary,Roses are red,violets are blue,Maddie is beautiful,flowers are too.”
My cheeks flushed in embarrassment,and I pushed James aside,grabbed my bag,and sprinted outta the school as fast as my legs can get me into the woods. -
(I know it’s kinda a lot shorter but I kinda feel I like the edited version better)
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Sounds great!)
As I ran through the forest, the creature ran from me, just like I was running from the school. My phone in my pocket buzzed and buzzed, and I knew it was people from school trying to reach me. I tossed my phone on the ground and continued running.
After running for what felt like hours, I heard a voice in the trees above me. "Patricia?" I look up and see Ms. Hitcher in a small tree house above me. She drops a ladder and motions for me to come up. Once I get up there, she helps me to my feet. "What's wrong sweetheart?" She asks me, noticing my red flushed face. "They found out about Maddie..." I sob, "oh, dear, come inside, i'll get you a cup of tea and we can talk about it.
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(ok I’ma continue)
When we’re inside the treehouse,Ms Hitcher pours a cup of hot,steaming tea for me and lets me vent about what happened.
“So like,yesterday after dinner my diary went missing,then today at school that bully James got it and I felt Matthew stole it and gave it to him,but the confusing thing is he seems sad about it,I don’t know what to think!” I rant,going on and on about all the things that went wrong.
After,like two hours,Ms Hitcher sends me back home,where I have dinner and go to bed. -
I wake up in the morning, drowsy as heck. what did Ms. Hitcher put in that tea? I think to myself, and then hear a knock at my door. "Happy birthday honey!" Mom says from the hallway, and I get up and open the door. "Whay do you mean, my birthday was yesterday." I ask, and she laughs. "You're not getting out of a day this important, Patricia." She shakes her head. "Breakfast is at the table. And there's the letter for you st your spot!" I groan. I don't want to ever see that letter again. After I go downstairs, I pick my letter up and go to throw it away, not noticing the significant change in weight. Mom gasps when she sees me. "No no no, don't throw that away!" She says, taking it from me and opening it. "See, your soulmate letter!" She says, and a picture falls out along with the letter.
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When I wake up in my bed,I hear Mom shouting up the stairs,”Pat!My birthday girl,come and open your letter!” I think,”Maybe it was all a bad dream.Maybe it wasn’t real.” and skip downstairs.
When I open my letter,I immediately know it wasn’t a bad dream.Because instead of the letter saying “Your soulmate does not exist in this universe” it says “Katey(Umm what is Maddie’s last name again lol)” and it is only my 17th birthday.
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Oop I didn’t notice u already started LOL
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