Pro-life (Against abortion) Essay...
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Many women dont know how their abortion procedure is going to be like. Abortion can be done in many ways. A baby can be removed by something called suction aspiration. Essentially, the baby is removed with a suction tube that acts as a vacuum and has a sharp end on it.The suction tube is inserted through the mothers womb. From there, the sharp end and tube cuts the baby into pieces. The hose is used to suck out the pieces. Another common way of abortion is the dilation and curettage. A looped knife immediately cuts the baby as soon as it goes into the mothers womb, and it scrapes and scratches whatever remains of the baby are left inside; always making sure that no pieces are left at all inside the mother. Another form is the dilation and evacuation. Forceps are used in this method, and the forceps are used to forcefully grab the baby, shatter and crush its cranium so that it does not move, finally ending the life of the baby. Forceps grab at its cranium, and remove it at once. This is exactly how babies are aborted. A special liquid called Methotrexate can collaborate to abort a baby. Methotrexate cuts the babys life support. Salt poisoning, which is the form of sticking a needle full of salt into the womb, intoxicates the baby, burning its skin, making it start to disintegrate, and the baby dies within an hour of the act, and the baby is delivered, but it has no life anymore. There are so many more ways a child is aborted, and these practices are all cruel. Aborting a child is not something the mother will forget. Once the act is done, minutes, hours, days, weeks, or even months may pass by, and it will come down on the female what she did. She will more than likely reflect on her decision of ending the life of a baby of her own blood. Symptoms of a guilty conscience will be present. The American Pregnancy Association says that a majority of women suffer negative emotional effects due to abortion. Many feel guilty, shameful, regretful, and some even have nightmares of what they did. Abortion is a hard decision and it is very likely that emotional instabilities will occur.
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it isn't really an essay if you ask me
you need need need an introductory paragraph, and at forst it seemed like you did. but then i realized that you failed to even make a thesis statement. you need to formulate a clear claim that your audience will clearly see your side. all you've done is explain abortion (which you shouldn't have done in the beginning. if you'd take the time to make a thesis, you could add the 'cruel' methods as a reason and use it to make one of your body paragraphs)
you need to have a well built, organized essay, but in order to do that properly, you need a thesis to utilize as the framework for the rest. think about whether you want to fully agree with not allowing abortion. if not, and you feel there are special circumstances, you need to create a thesis that qualifies that.
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Give the definition of abortion and a little stuff about it in the beginning.
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It's not an essay lol its a portion of a paragraph
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Around the world, millions of innocent children die every year from famine, disaster, abuse, neglect, and government sanctioned murder.
Abortion is nothing more than legalized murder. There are a lot of reasons as to why abortion should not be a legal act; why abortion should be illegal not only in a few states, but all the states that compose and make up the United States of America.
Abortion should not allowed. Abortion is the life of an unborn child being ended in the mothers womb. When a pregnant woman chooses to abort her unborn baby, the babys life is going to be put to a quick, permanent end. Unborn babies have a right to live, just like anyone else. For example, Exodus 20:13 says, You shall not commit murder. How is it justifiable to punish a murderer, but not punish a mother who chooses to end the life of her child? Walter J. End, from Central Maine News, interviewed various women on their opinions. Mother Teresa was pro-life and made her point clear. If we accept that a mother kill her own child, how can we tell people not to kill each other? It is not justified at all to allow someone to kill her own child-- a being that has yet to be born and live the wonders of life. Abortion is morally wrong and it is willful murder, another point that Central Maine News brought up.
Furthermore, if a woman does not want the baby and/or knows that she will not be able to take care of the infant in the first place, contraceptives should be used to avoid pregnancy. Whether the reason be in favor of mental immaturity, lack of funds to raise a baby, not liking babies, or anything else, pregnancy should be avoided with the right protection. Theres a variety of contraceptives such as oral contraceptives, which include birth control. Jan Hoffman, writer of the article, Rate of the U.S abortions Hit Lowest since Roe vs Wade, from the New York Times, says, Researchers suggested that increased use of long-term birth control, such as intrauterine devices and contraceptive implants contributed to the recent decline of abortions. This article was published January 18, 2017, indicating that there have been recent declines in abortions because of the use of contraceptives, which is a very good sign. People should realize that abortion can be avoided with the help of those contraceptives. No lives have to be eliminated when contraceptives are used in the proper way. Contraceptives are a good way to avoid getting pregnant. There will not be reasons to exterminate a baby if contraceptives are being properly used. Better yet, the type of contraceptive the woman decides to use entirely up to her choice and preference. Women will not have abort because they will be pregnant if they use contraceptives.
In addition, abortion can affect a womans mental state. Women go through many stages in life. A woman had to be a child before becoming an adult. Children have issues that seem like their world is collapsing, such as getting a timeout for talking, forgetting their homework and more. Afterwards, puberty starts usually in the pre-teen years and causes changes physically, such as growing taller and leaving old things behind. Problems for teenagers are more complicated, such as dating and being popular at school. These problems get resolved, but unlike a child, it is harder to forgive and forget. There is a scar left from all incidents. However, teenage years pass by and puberty is over. The teenager blossomed into an adult and the real-world problems start heating. Phone bills, rent bills, and college are dominant. Problems that adults face are much more serious than problems teenagers have. Physically, adults are done with puberty. But mental problems will never end. If a woman aborts her child, it may not bother her because she does not want the baby. There is no bond or adoring love from mother to baby. The woman will not forget the decision she took. In the future, it is possible that she will regret her choice. She will be tormented in her head by thoughts of what she did. People who find out of the abortion will be quick to judge. This adds on to the pressure the woman who aborted the baby will feel. She will be judged quickly upon her decision. The torment will affect the woman and sadness will take place, which could potentially lead to depression and suicide.
Many women dont know how their abortion procedure is going to be like. Abortion can be done in many ways. A baby can be removed by something called suction aspiration. Essentially, the baby is removed with a suction tube that acts as a vacuum and has a sharp end on it.The suction tube is inserted through the mothers womb. From there, the sharp end and tube cuts the baby into pieces. The hose is used to suck out the pieces. Another common way of abortion is the dilation and curettage. A looped knife immediately cuts the baby as soon as it goes into the mothers womb, and it scrapes and scratches whatever remains of the baby are left inside; always making sure that no pieces are left at all inside the mother. Another form is the dilation and evacuation. Forceps are used in this method, and the forceps are used to forcefully grab the baby, shatter and crush its cranium so that it does not move, finally ending the life of the baby. Forceps grab at its cranium, and remove it at once. This is exactly how babies are aborted. A special liquid called Methotrexate can collaborate to abort a baby. Methotrexate cuts the babys life support. Salt poisoning, which is the form of sticking a needle full of salt into the womb, intoxicates the baby, burning its skin, making it start to disintegrate, and the baby dies within an hour of the act, and the baby is delivered, but it has no life anymore. There are so many more ways a child is aborted, and these practices are all cruel. Aborting a child is not something the mother will forget. Once the act is done, minutes, hours, days, weeks, or even months may pass by, and it will come down on the female what she did. She will more than likely reflect on her decision of ending the life of a baby of her own blood. Symptoms of a guilty conscience will be present. The American Pregnancy Association says that a majority of women suffer negative emotional effects due to abortion. Many feel guilty, shameful, regretful, and some even have nightmares of what they did. Abortion is a hard decision and it is very likely that emotional instabilities will occur.
Many people agree that being raped is a reason to allow abortion. However, the issue still remains that the child produced by that rape will suffer. Who gives any person the right to decide her life is more important than someone else's? Lots of pro-choice supporters like to say that it was not the woman's choice to be raped. However, one can easily use that logic and say that it was not the child's choice to be created.Another pro-choice view is that a woman should have the option of abortion if the pregnancy is causing her severe health issues--as in life or death. Yet again, someone is deciding that one life is more deserving than another. That is not a decision any person has the right to make. Writer Susan Milligan, on an article titled Is Abortion a Human Right?, on U.S News, stated, In the case of a fatal fetal abnormality, there is no life to protect. That is the only case in which abortion is a viable option--the case where the fetus has already died in the womb and is simply being removed. In that case, there is no life being taken.
Overall, abortion should not be legal. Lives are being taken faster than people realize. How could one deny the right for an innocent and unborn baby to live? All lives have mattered, all lives matter, and all lives will matter. -
sum paragraphs didn't separate somehow but there are separate paragraphs lol, this is my final draft but it doesn't seem right DX
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nvm XD too long
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