Help
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Thread Topic: Help
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I'm working on a character with the ability to use Animal Tamer magic.
One of her character flaws is that she can not talk with another person without panicking and freaking out and he smiled this includes friends and family , she can make interactions but they are all panicked and things and she tends to write things down rather than speak.
I wanted to know if that's suitable she does of course have more flaws but apparently
Social issues are redundant or something? -
still a mary sue
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She really isn't though.
Also could a mod move this to the library I think I'm going to use this thread to try to develop her?
I've changed it a little she's not unable to speak to her parents because I decided that was a little too much. -
Ok so I think I'm probably going to name her Amber or possibly Lillie/ Lilly.
She has one of the common traits that someone born with her form of magic would have ( orange eyes)
The usual age of mastery of this magic is eighteen.
Unlocking it is usually fourteen
She unlocked it at ten due to a great need for it after she was attacked by a big cat.
However her dad save some her because her magic was still developing and stuff.
She hasn't mastered it yet but she hasn't been able to take ten creatures.
Which isn't anything really special.
No tamer is able to tame a mythical creature so she won't be doing that. -
She's fourteen when she's first introduced.
The biggest animal she's tamed is a wild cat.
Her mother is a healer and her father is knight.
Healing magic is extremely rare so her mother's income is quite good as is her father's so she is quite well of. -
lol still is a mary sue
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Alright so I'm calling her Amber at least for now.
She always assumes the worst about someone before even giving them a chance.
She assumes no one is better than her at her magic. This is not true. M -
I'm going to start on Amber again when I get back home.
Until then I'll be working on Thea Whitley and Jodie Swan, the daughter of the last unicorn and the swan princess.
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