My stories/story
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Thread Topic: My stories/story
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Story 1
Pretty but crazy, deadly,and sad girl
Chapter 1
I get ready for school, I go in my mall/colset I pick what every popular girl will pick. a cute pink shirt with a grey skrit with my designer boot and jewellery (of course!). I text my boo, "about to go to school love you" he replied with, "Ok love you too". I go in my pink Toyota and drive to school. I meet up with my boo at the lockers, like always waiting for me. He kiss me on the cheek and said, "Hi my beautiful Rachel", and I replied with, "Hi my handsome Steven. The first bell rang we kissed and said goodbye. I was the most popular girl in school, and I look like a popular girl blonde hair with blue tips and greyish-blueish eyes. I had my mionions (Chelsie and Katie), and I had good bait on my fishing pole which means I have someone who loves me. But of course every popular girl has a enemy Cristal Willams UHG I hate her. She likes my boo and wants my boo. While I was walking to math I see her firlting with my boo, I walked over there and grab him and take him to class. -
Chapter 2
When school was over I drive home unlock the door, because god knows where my parents are. I go to the kitchen grab a sparkling water and went upstairs. I go in my special room and turn on the lights. This room was special because it has all the memories when I was a kid, before my dad started pushing me to be perfect. Before life was easy, before I knew what being was. Right in the middle it was the most suppressive possession it was a mirror, but just any mirror it had lights all around this chair is when I won 1st place in the jounior leauge of dancing. My dad made the coach give ut to us. I sat down in it and say "Am I pretty 3 times". Of course it was just a mirror so it didn't say anything, but my opinion it always said yes. I turn off the lights and lock the door. I go in my room ahd sit on the bed and do my homework so I won't get grounded. I make a salad, and text my boo goodnight. He replied with, We need to love you. What was he going to say? I thought. -
Can I rewrite this monstrosity?
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This made me throw up in my mouth.
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I loved this story! You're a good writer dg.
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Bump)
Chapter 3
Today is Saturday, yay. I sigh knowing that I have to see whats up with my boo. Great. I put on a Fall theme dress with my high-heel hightops from Converse, I eat a toast with jam on it. I wrie a note for my parents, grab my car keys and drive to Steven's house. I unlock the door with the key he gave me. There he is playing video games like a football player would do on his day off. I interup him, "What did you need to talk about?" I ask. He responded with, "This's going to be the most complicated question in a relationship." I look at him extremely confuse and say, "You are creeping me out Steven". He ignore my sentence and said, "Do you love me?" My mind just completely stop when he said that. There was a long pause the I finally spoke with these words, "Yes, I love you". Steven didn't look happy when I said those words. "We only teenagers we don't know what love means" He says I ignore that sentence and say, "But the question is, do you love me?"
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