Come Back
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:15pm
Thread Topic: Come Back
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My friend has been really sad and gloomy lately, and I fear she may have depression. This is kind of a prayer/ poem for her to get better and to come back after being "amiss."
Look around you,
At the blank canvas you’ve created.
You had it painted in wonderful hues…
Now disconnected, out of touch,
Lost to the desperate waters of despair.
The icy cling of depression has you in its clutch.
Vacant eyes, hollow smiles,
Facing the world with a vacant stare
As you travel down a gloomy way that doesn’t end for miles.
What’s to come of this?
A silver lining, a lesson learned, a moral in the story?
No one knows, except for those have gone amiss. -
Wow, that was really good! I love how you tie words together. Nice! :)
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Thanks ilm! I'm glad to finally get some feed-back :)
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I love this, it's written really well :)
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