Abandoned Underground Ruins
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Thread Topic: Abandoned Underground Ruins
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OPENING/PROLOGUE:
Hello everyone! This is the opening of the story. To be honest, I don't have any reference according to this story and all characters including plots are made by me. This story isn't a series, so it'll take a lot of time to write, publish, check and also read. Because of that, can you all respect me by reading my story? Even though, it'll take a long time to finish it.
SUMMARY:
Three main characters with the name Adfrey, Irina and Rhythm were kidnapped by a mysterious kidnapper during their wonderful days. With no idea how to get out, they must face the enormous danger the ruins gave to them, the abandoned underground ruins. Will they make it to the top and save themselves? -
The story starts with a male teenager called Adfrey Hamilton. Adfrey is a 16-aged boy with a natural blue straight hair. His eyes color are partially blue and green since his parents are from different countries. His hair color is mostly black and brown like Asian's.
Today, he's been walking home for about thirty minutes. He has just finished his school today with a very happy face, as there's nothing bad happens. Fortunately, he was elected to be the school's student motivator.
To celebrate the graduation he had, he invited his friends to have a lunch with him in the downtown. The restaurant is approximately twelve kilometers from his home, but he drives a car, so it wouldn't take long.
While he was eating with his friends, his car is stolen by an unknown thief. He didn't know how to get home, so he decided to go home with his own feet. Nicely, he didn't want to bother his friends and rejected his friends offer to take his home.
After walking for about thirty minutes, he gets tired and unable to continue his walk.
"Sigh, it's very tiring." He sighs and mutters to himself, "I could've accepted my friends' offer, but it was my fault. I mustn't regret it."
He manages to sit down on a chair near when he stood. It's very relaxing since he's very tired. He gets surprised when he sees two girl teenagers in front of him involved into a fight.
One of them is a red straight-haired girl with red beautiful eyes and the other one looks like her counterpart with orange color instead of red.
Just before the fight, the red-haired girl wasn't aware as she was only staring the outlet on her right and the orange-haired girl tripped over someone's shoes and fell on top of the red-haired girl.
"Hey! Watch out!" The red-haired girl shouts to the other girl.
"Sorry, it's only an accident." The orange-haired girl replies trying to stay calm.
"It hurt you know!" The other one shouts again.
"Hey stop!" Adfrey tries to separate them.
"Who are you trying to separate us? We're having a fight, get over us." The red one replies to him.
"Fighting on the main street isn't a good idea, we might get caught by a security officer patrolling around here." Adfrey says back.
"I don't want to hear anymore from you, just go away please." The red-haired replies.
"But..." Adfrey says, but he's overwhelmed.
Suddenly, someone pushes Adfrey from his back which makes him fall. He's a man taller than him with an age around twenty five. He cuffs Adfrey with a tight and strong handcuffs. Meanwhile, his assistants cuff the girls with the same handcuffs.
They put a brown paper box on around their heads to make them stop shouting and asking for help. They camouflage in the crowds and run to an abandoned building.
Before arriving there, the leader knocks all of them out, so that they don't know the way to get out from the place they are would be put into.
After spinning in the maze looking place, they are scattered on a same place like a chamber underground. It's very hot there and you would be sweating endlessly.
They leave the teenagers there and exit the hidden chamber. They are wearing black suit and black trousers symbolizing the word of massive enlarging darkness.
Few hours later, the teenagers wake up from their sleeps.
"Ughh..." Adfrey mutters and says to the girls, "Where are us?"
"Ughh... I don't know." The red-haired girl replies.
"The only thing I could remember is that you were pushed out by a big black man wearing black clothes. Oh, no way, perhaps we were kidnapped!" The orange-haired girl claims and shouts.
Adfrey stands up and cleans himself from the dust that sticks on his clothes, then asks the girls, "I haven't asked for awhile, may I know who are you, girls?"
"Sorry, I was raged this afternoon and I couldn't control myself. My name is Irina Zikaru. I was born in Japan and my family transferred here two years ago, so maybe I have adapted to the environments here." Irina, the red-haired girl answers him.
"My name is Rhythm Ensemble. I know both of them are words used in the musical word, but guess what, my family is all musical talented and hobbyist. Not going to ask why they named me like that." Rhythm answers to his question.
"So I suppose I call you Irina and Rhythm?" Adfrey asks.
"Yeah." Irina and Rhythm answer together.
Adfrey wanders around the chamber where they are locked in. Meanwhile, Irina and Rhythm have no clue what to do.
"I'm sorry for my uncontrolled rage." Irina asks for apologize from Rhythm.
"It's all right, I'm not that hurt." Rhythm accepts the apologize.
"Hey girls!" Adfrey shouts from a distance.
Irina and Rhythm walk to Adfrey who is examining a symbol drawn on the wall.
"This symbol sounds familiar." Adfrey says.
"I think I've learned this symbol before. Oh, it's the Dione symbol. From what I have learned, the symbol is sketched by the people of Dione in the ruins they made." Irina replies to him.
"Dione? I've never heard anything about that. But it means..." Rhythm says but gets cut by Adfrey.
"We are trapped in their underground ruins." Adfrey says to them and continues, "Yes, both of you were right. We were kidnapped that afternoon and then we were brought here."
"Is there any way we can escape from this place?" Rhythm asks.
"Yes, but not that easy. As far as I know, this place was made hundred meters below the ground. Besides, the way to get up is made like a maze, endless maze. It could be harder if the kidnapper has guards patrolling." Adfrey answers by explaining.
Adfrey walks to the chamber door and examines the door lock.
"This metal door is too fragile. Only one kick could break this door." Adfrey says.
"You sure?" Irina asks him.
"I guess, but it's the only way." Adfrey answers and kicks the door with his strong leg.
"Hey! You!" Two guarding guards shout to them.
"Umm... I didn't expect this to happen." Irina says to him.
"Let me take care of this." Adfrey replies her. -
Adfrey moves closer to the guards who are holding a metal spear on their hands. When Adfrey almost get stabbed, he kicks the attacking guard's hand and grabs the falling spear right on it's handle.
He swings the spear and hits both of them on their heads fatally and knocks them down. He grabs the other spear and gives it to Irina.
"Use this for now. It will help you defend yourself." Adfrey says.
"But I can't handle a single spear, I prefer using my fists." Irina rejects as she doesn't want the spear.
"How about you?" Adfrey asks to Rhythm.
"Haven't tried of it before." Rhythm replies.
"Then try it." Adfrey replies back and gives the spear to her.
"It's heavy." Rhythm says and continues, "But I might be getting used to it."
"All prepared? If yes, then let's go, before the other guards know we're escaping." Adfrey says to them.
"I am." Irina and Rhythm say.
Adfrey quits the chamber and sees his surroundings. It's only a narrow curve path, but has two sides. One to the left and one to the right.
"Which side will we be going to?" Adfrey asks.
"I recommend left first?" Irina gives a suggestion.
"As you said, let's go." Adfrey accepts.
The long narrow hallway makes them worry, since they've been sneaking for about ten minutes but the path has no end. However, Adfrey sees a wooden door from afar and comes closer to the door.
"Are you sure this is the way out?" Rhythm asks.
"I bet, there is no other choice, or we will be lost in this dense labyrinth." Adfrey answers as the leader.
Adfrey breaks out the door with his kick and it leads to an armory left by the guards. The armory has bows, arrows, swords, shields and every types of weapons including the offensive and defensive.
They wander in the small armory and check every weapon they'd like to use. Adfrey grabs a strong sharp metal spear laying on a rack above him and says, "I prefer spears, my family has a history of using spear. I will be a lot better and useful if I use spears," and he continues saying after grabbing a metal shield with a Dione logo on it that is put on the ground, "And a shield to defend myself from unwanted attacks."
Irina wanders a little longer than Adfrey and finally gets her choice.
"I'll use dual swords on both of my hands. I prefer using it. My family taught me martial arts, so using a sword with a strong muscle and defensive skills would be a great idea." She says to them.
Rhythm mutters as she doesn't know what to use because she only has a musical history in her family.
"Bow and arrow? I was taught archery by my friends in my brigade squad and I only able to operate bows." Rhythm says and grabs a compound bow and lots of arrows from a shelf. She also puts her arrows in a arrows metal sack and sticks it on her back.
Adfrey catches a sight of metal armors left by the guards recently and says to the girls, "We almost forgot the armors, we must use better gears and suits if we want to escape this place without dying."
Adfrey grabs three sets of metal armors and gives two of them to the girls.
"Use them." Adfrey says while wearing his on, so do the girls wear theirs.
Suddenly, they hear a voice of few guards talking outside of the armory, so they take their favorite weapons and gears while getting ready.
The guards are walking right into the armory and see the teenagers wearing their weapons and gears. They're not brave, but can be called fearful. Defensively, they exit the armory and starts running on the hallway asking for help.
Adfrey is shocked and tries to calm the girls because their face looks frightened, "Don't worry, believe in yourselves, trust yourselves that you can handle them and be proud of your skills."
"Thank you." Rhythm says and nods.
"Let's go!" Irina shouts and leads the other teenagers out.
Irina moves in the first position, Adfrey second and Rhythm third as her weapon can't handle short range battles. Irina sees fully equipped guards on the hallway running.
"Enemies spotted." Irina whispers to them.
"Are they equipped?" Adfrey asks.
"Yes, most of them are." Irina answers and continues as the guards get closer, "Get ready all, they are coming closer and closer."
"Now!" Adfrey shouts when he peeks on a hole on the wall.
Adfrey replaces Irina's slot as the tanker on the team and blocks the incoming attacks shot and swung by the guards. He's able to use the shield well and retaliates as soon as he has the chance.
Adfrey knocks three guards out and has got tired blocking the attacks.
"Irina, your turn!" Adfrey shouts directing her.
"Sure!" Irina says and nods.
Irina replaces Adfrey and starts double swinging her swords swiftly as fast as the wind. She stabs and cuts most of them to the dead with a very painful slash.
A guard almost hits Irina using the sword, but Rhythm successfully save her by aiming accurately and shooting her arrow right on the guard's chest.
Irina keeps swinging the guards as the front line attackers assisted by Adfrey, while Rhythm takes the defensive spot shooting arrows to the guards.
Everything works well until all the guards have knocked down. Around thirty guards were attacking them and made them tired. They all lay down on the ground.
"It's not a good idea escaping...." Adfrey says to them, sweating of tiredness.
"Yeah." Irina replies as she gets knackered.
"It was very tiring, you know." Rhythm also suggests.
"But we can't stay here. If we keep laying down here, they will find us and we have to fight a horde of them. I wouldn't recommend that happen, I'm not wishing, but careful." Adfrey says to them.
"You're right... But.. But I'm very tired." Irina says to him.
"We can stay here for a bit, but I don't know when the next wave comes." Adfrey says to her.
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