My Characters
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Thread Topic: My Characters
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These characters are characters that I made up a few years ago.
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Riley:
Tall, blonde, blue-eyed Riley Evans is the goody-2-shoes of the world. She never gets anything wrong. She's popular and nice. She also happens to be twins with bad-girl Alex.
Alex:
Goth, black-haired, grey-eyed Alexandra Evans is the person that tarnishes Riley's reputation. She doesn't care about what others think of her. She has been caught shoplifting and doing arson only a few times with her crew.
Jax:
Smart, handsome, brown-haired and brown-eyed Jax Venus likes Alex but is too scared to ask her out. Jax is part of Alex's crew, and has an anger problem.
Mark:
Red-haired, green-eyed Mark hates the Evans sisters. Both of them are to different. But he has to admit, Alex looks very pretty. -
Please tell me what you think.
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is good.
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the way they're described is just really generic
being generic isn't always bad, but it does make things boring and bland because there's no originality to it -
needs to be a tad more descriptive. maybe elaborate on personality traits?
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Yeah. I'm just trying out different characters I made to see which one is best. Any suggestions?
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