A Romeo and Juliet remake.
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Chapter 1,Meeting:
Juliet was excited to move to a different town. Her old town had a lot of gun shots going off. Then her mom said,"Juliet. Will you help me unpack my stuff for my office?" She said,"Sure. Just hold on a minute. I need to unpack some of my CDs and electronics." Then she came to a CD her ex boyfriend gave to her before she left. It was IN THIS MOMENT:BLOOD. She hasn't played it yet. Then she put it with the rest of her CDs. Then she went to help her mom. Her mom said,"Nevermind I got it." Juliet groaned and went outside. Then she saw a cute boy. His hair was red, his eyes were blue. He was tall and handsome. Soon he came to her. He said,"Hello, my name is Romeo. Who are you?" She said,"I'm Juliet."
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Chapter 2-Seeing:
Romeo said,"That's a nice name." Juliet nodded. Then he said,"So. I got to go. I'll talk to you later." She said,"Bye." Then she went home. Once she came in the house she realized she had a sunburn. "Stupid sun. Can a girl be happy in the summer?" She mumbled. Then her dad said,"What do you want to eat tonight? Me and mom thought pizza but what do you want?" Juliet said,"Pizza is fine." Then her mother came in the kitchen with them. Soon she said,"Juliet. Do you want to go shopping later?" She nodded her head and put her headphones on. She sighed and listened to music. Soon she thought she saw Romeo. She blinked and turns out it was a picture of her brother. She said,"I hope you come home soon. What is it like in the army?" She shook her head and felt tears forming. She blinked the tears back and went to her room. Soon she got over it and said,"I'm going outside mom! I'm going to fill the pool." Her mom said,"Do you want to finish packing?"
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Chapter 3-What?:
She said,"Not right now." Her mom said,"OK. If you need me for anything I'll be in my office." Juliet said,"OK." Then she went outside. She unpacked the pool and then Romeo saw her. He went to her and said,"Do you need help?" Juliet accendently dropped the pool when she heard his voice. He said,"What's wrong?" Juliet looked behind her and sighed out of relief. She said,"I might need some help. I didn't know who you were for a few minutes." He smiled and then they worked on the pool. Juliet was having some troubles with a pole. Romeo grabbed her hand and they paused for a minute. Juliet smiled and they went back to work. Soon they were finished. Romeo said,"I got these feelings for you. I like you Juliet." She looked up at him. She said,"Want to hang out sometime?" He said,"Sure." Then Juliet saw the pizza delivery guy. She said,"I gotta go. Bye." Romeo said,"Bye."
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Chapter 4-Laughter:
Juliet went in her house, Romeo went into his. He was in love. He knew it, he was planning ways to tell her. His mom said,"Hey honey. Did you tell her yet?" He shook his head no and sighed. She said,"OK. Probaly tomorrow?" He shook his head and put in his earbuds. Soon his dad came in the room. He said,"Hey Romeo. Supper is cooking." He shook his head and said,"What are we having?" His dad said,"Chicken and rice." Romeo said,"OK." Then he went in his room. He felt an urge to go to her house. He felt an urge to run. He felt love when he was eith Juliet. He looked in a mirror. He said,"Look Romie. You got this. You just have to not worry." Then he praticed what he was going to say to her. Soon he was being called for downstairs. His cat meowed as he walked down the stairs. He bemt down and pet it, he couldn't stop thinking about Juliet. He loved everything about her. Her curves, her personality, her smile. He had to tell her somehow. He was going to do it. He then went downstairs and ate dinner.
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Chapter 5-Telling:
Romeo went out of his house after supper. He then saw Juliet walk out. She was wearing white shorts with a floral bikini top. She also had headphones on and a pair of red shades on. Then she took off her shades. Soon Romeo went up to her. Juliet smiled and went up to him. Romeo said,"I need to tell you something." Then he blushed. Juliet said,"What is it?" Romeo said."I like you." Juliet smiled. She went up to him and hugged him. She said,"I like you to." Romeo hugged her back and smiled. Juliet smiled and let him go. Juliet said,"Tomorrow we got school." Romeo said,"Yep. Just the day after tomorrow we are out for summer break." She smiled. Romeo soon saw her take off her headphones. "Come with me." Juliet said. She smiled and then blushed. Romeo said,"Why?"
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Chapter 6-Swimming:
Juliet said,"We're going swimming in the pool." Romeo blushed and said,"I think I hear my..." Juliet grabbed his arm before he finished the sentence. He looked in her eyes. She had a smile forming on her face. Romeo said,"Fine." Juliet went to the pool. Romeo went with her. He let her on the ladder first. Juliet climbed the ladder and jumped in the pool. Romeo went on the ladder and went in the pool. Juliet smiled and tackled him. They both went under and came back up. Romeo sighed happily and they bost bursted out laughing. Romeo grabbed Juliet and put her on his back. Soon he swam. Juliet held onto him and smiled.
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Chapter 7-Music:
Romeo held her hands close to his shoulders. Soon Juliet slipped off. Romeo stopped and swam to her. He said,"Juliet. Maybe we can throw a party this summer together. Can we do that?" Juliet said,"Sure." and swam to the diving board. Romeo looked at her. She took a step and slipped. She fell, soon Romeo quickly went to her and catched her. Juliet closed her eyes. Soon she opened an eye. She sighed in relief and started to sing "Hello-Adele." Romeo swam to the ladder and put her on it. Juliet got out of the pool. Romeo got out after her. Juliet put on her headphones. "See you tomorrow." Juliet said smiling.
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Chapter 8-School:
Romeo said,"Bye my sweet." Then they both walked off. Romeo's dad was in the living room while his mom was doing yoga in the den. Romeo wondered why she was doing that. He didn't say anything. "Hey Dad." Romeo said. His dad looked at him and smiled. Romeo quickly backed away. "What is going on? Is it bad news or good news?" His dad said,"Son sit by me." Romeo just stared at him. "Son, Mom is pregnant." His dad said. Romeo widened his eyes. His dad nodded his head. "So umm... who's the girl next door? Y'all look like y'all like each othet." His dad said. Romeo replied,"Her name is Juliet. She's like an angel. She's a beautiful...." He was cit off by his dad. He was laughing his head off. Romeo held back a few tears. 'How could he be so dumb?' Romeo thought. 'He says that love never lasts. Always laughing at couples who broke apart. Mom doesn't deserve a man like this!' Romeo thought. He growled.
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Chapter 9-Blood:
His dad stopped laughing. "What are you going to do 'lover boy'. Y'all will be apart by the next month." His dad said. Romeo got really mad. He said,"Listen up, 'dad'. Mom doesn't deserve you! You only like her because we're rich and she's beautiful!" His mom stopped doing yoga. She had tears in her eyes. "Yes. That's what love is all about my boy. It's about looks and money."His dad said. Soon he laughed. Soon Romeo said,"That's not true! You left a lot of girls because they got fat!" Soon he ran up to him and pushed him. He toppled backwards. He came back and Romeo and his dad fought. Soon mom broke them. "We need to break apart." She said crying. His dad got mad and stormed off. Romeo had blood all over his body. "I'll be OK. Don't worry about me mom." Romeo said. He staggered into the bathroom and cleaned off the blood.
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Chapter 10-Roses:
He came out the bathroom with a few cuts and bruises. 'It was worth it Romie.' He thought. Then his mom said,"Thank you Romie. You saved me from Hell." She smiled and hug him. "How are you doing?" Romeo said. "I'm not doing well." She said while wiping away tears. "I'm going to Grow-A-Lot. I'll be right back." Romeo said grabbing his hoodie. "OK." His mom said going up the stairs. He was freinds with the owner. Once he went there Bob said,"Hey Romie! What do you need? How's life?" Romeo said,"It'd going good. I need two bunches of roses. One for my girlfriend. One for mom." Bob smiled and handed him roses. "That will be 50 cents." Romeo gave him a dollar. "Keep the change." Romeo said. He went home and gave a bunch of roses to his mom. "Romie. You didn't have to! Thank you." She said smiling. She stopped crying and hugged him. "No ptoblem Mom. I hate to see beautiful girls being sad." He said smiling. Then he went out and saw Juliet. "Juliet!" He said to her. She smiled and ran to him with open arms. He slipped away before she can hug her and hugged her from behind. "Hey there angel. Have some roses." He said with the roses in his hand. Juliet blushed and took them. "Thanks." Juliet said.
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Chapter 11-The sad song:
Romeo said,"No need to thank me hunbun." He kissed her cheek. Juliet smiled and atarted to blush. Romeo grabbed her hands and held them. Juliet broke loose. She said,"Shut up and dance with me!" She laughed and Romeo grabbed her hands. The dance until the sunset. They were tired but didn't care. "So this is what the town is like." Juliet said. "Mhm." Romeo said wrapping his arms around her. "I wish that I met you sooner. All my exes were jerks." She said tearing up. Romeo said,"Most boys are like that. Sometimes they're greefy b----es who wants sex twenty-four seven. But I'm not like that." Juliet tried to hold back the tears. Soon one fell out. Romeo took his fingers and dried her tears. Juliet said,"My curfew is about up. Bye Romeo. See you tonorrow." Romeo said,"Bye sweetheart." Soon they both went home.
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Chapter 12-Wow:
Juliet smiled once she came in. She walked up the stairs and unpacked her stuff. She put the books in her shelf. Her paper and art supplies in her basket. Then she put her CDs and tapes on another shelf. She had two shelvesful. Then she took a shower and went to bed. The next morning she woke up. She got ready and then walked downstairs. Then her mom said,"Morning honey. How did you sleep?" Juliet said,"Fine." Then ran outside. She saw Romeo waiting for her. She smiled and walked his way. Once she got there he said,"Hey baby." Juliet blushed and grabbed his hand.
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Chapter 13-New-
Romeo held her hand. Then they walked to school. "So how did you sleep?" Romeo said. "I kind of had a nightmare. Sometjing told me it's going to come true. So what did happen to you?" Juliet said. Soon they reached the school. "Class. Meet our new student. She moved here to Grunder from Ruhiky." The teacher said. "Here is Juliet. You came on the right time. Tomorrow is the offical school dance." Then Juliet said,"The school is big. Anyways, hi I'm Juliet. I'm fifteen and I'm new, My other town had a bomb go off. Also my brother is in the millitary. My dad is a directer during my mom is a desighner." Juliet said. Soon she sat down.
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Chapter 14- A new BFF:
Romeo whispered,"Don't worry." to Juliet. Juliet smiled and opened her notebook. Soon the teacher teached. Then she said,"Juliet. What was the cost of the damage of the bomb in your town?" Juliet blushed. "Like umm.... $200.00" Julet said. Soon the class started to giggle. Then the bell rung. Then a girl pushed her against a locker. "Hey there b----. You're stupid." She said. Soon she punched her. Another girl, she thought was her friend, pulled her away from her. Romeo came to her. "Hi my name is Rosemary." She said. "You okay babe?" Romeo said. "Hello Rosemary my name is Juliet. Yes Romeo I'm okay honey." Then she got up and grabbed her stuff.
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Chapter 15- The parents turn:
After school Juliet went home. She turned up her headphones up more. She did her chores and sang along to every song. Soon she saw her mom talking with her dad. She put her headphones on her neck. "Maybe we should just do something together tonight." Her mother said. "I can't honey. I got work." Her dad said. Mom said, "Than call in." Her dad said, "Okie I will." Juliet nodded her head and continued with her chores. Romeo was helping his mother with the father issue.
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