A Romeo and Juliet remake.

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  Raven Morgatha Novice

  8 years ago
  Chapter 16- Late night:
  Romeo said,"Are you feeling better?" His mom said, "Yes. This baby is almost dued." Romeo smiled. Juliet saw her parents getting ready. "We'll be back at midnight. Romeo can come over, but as long you don't you know." Dad said. Juliet nodded her head. Romeo said, "Mom I'm going to Juliet's. Okay?" His mom nodded her head. Romeo smiled and went to Juliet's. He inocked on the door. Juliet answered it and smiled. She grabbed hus hand and pulled him in the house. Romeo smiled and hugged her."I was just about to call you." Juliet said. They both laughed and wemt in the living room. "We're going now. Bye." Juliet's mom and dad said.
  Cliff-hanger.
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  eclipseT_E_C Novice

  8 years ago
  because every person puts CLIFF-HANGER at the end of everything
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  Raven Morgatha Novice

  8 years ago
  Chapter 17- Dancing:
  Juliet said,"Bye." Then her parents left. Romeo said,"What do you want to do?" Juliet shrugged. Romeo picked her up. She smiled. "What are you doing?" She said. Romeo said, "I have no clue." He said, Then they both laughed. Juliet went down and turned on her stereo. Soon they started to dance together. Then there was a knock on the door. Juliet sighed and let go of Romeo. Romeo smiled. Then Juliet walked to the door. Soon she opened it. She screamed in excitement.
  Cliff-hanger
• M0use Newbie

  8 years ago
  I like totally agree with eclipse T E C.
  
  I like your characters, but your plot just suks. put this on fanfic.net because it don't belong here.

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