The Hanging
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Thread Topic: The Hanging
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I wanted to kill myself. This poor Kazhara wanted to kill herself. I had been looking for suicide ways. Hanging, poisoning, stabbing, and jumping of cliff, etc. I had chosen hanging. I didn't care if it would be painful, I didn't care if I would be suffocated to a painful death. I didn't care if my face would be purple, I didn't care, if there would be any mark around my neck, I didn't care if my neck would be broken.
When my parents were out of the house, I looked for rope. I remembered that I have one at the robeward. I finally found one and hid it there. I waited and waited for the right moment to hang myself. I found a perfect place to, and I didn't want to do Partial Hanging, I wanted to do Complete Hanging.
Meanwhile, I tried to find out how to tie a noose. I just couldn't follow it, so I would tie it randomly.
Finally, the time had come. My parents left me at home alone -bringing my sister with them- for a week. On the secoud day, I pulled the rope out from it hiding place, opening it so I could use it. I had found an easy step, so I tie the rope around my neck using that step. The rope would not be tighten in that case, and I didn't care if I would suffer. I took the yellow chair, it was high enough for me to reach the perfect place.
I tied the end of the rope there, using the way I had learnt when following a 'Pramuka' competition. I took a hold of the rope using my hand, checking if it was strong enough to hold me. Yes, it was good and strong. For awhile, I used my hands to held my weight so that I would not hang yet, and my foot to push the chair away, leaving little clue of how I hung myself. And slowly but surely, I lowered myself, releasing the hands's hold. I felt that I could not breath again, and I couldn't think anymore. I was flailing my hands and foot around, trying to survive. But, it was only a reflect. Our body was progammed to survive. Everything around me was darkened, and I saw some flashing light. I wasn't blinded with that flash, it was part of my now vision.
I felt weak. I had no power left in me. No more oxygen could reach my lungs. My respiration stopped. It stopped for the rest of the eternity. My flailing stopped too, no energy was left in me. After a few painful minutes, -I could not count how long it was, I had lost all of my logical thought- my heart stopped beating. It gave few weak beats, before giving up. It was the end of me.
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Hey, guys! I need to write that out! Or else I'll really do that! It cou- I mean can hold me alive for awhile. And Kazhara is my fictious name. Never ever follow that!
How was my story? Has it been better than A Lucky Soul?
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Yay! And that perfect place is also really in my home. Right above me. That rope is also real. That knowledge is also not fake!!!
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Decent. More details would be a nice touch. Very twisting story, but nothing to it except the process of hanging. But overall, it was dark. -
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