Cody's poem, etc. thread!
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Thread Topic: Cody's poem, etc. thread!
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I'm not the best
Nor the worst
I'll try my hardest
I'll give almost all.
Focus I will
On my objective.
Claim I shall
A ending faithful. -
Whisper me a lullaby
Sing to me, as you cry.
I'm here for you
To help you through
The times helps needed
The times its accepted.
Do know this
I'm here for you. -
What is this we live?
A life full of wonder?
A dream made of hope?
A false item to lead us astray?
We never know exactly
For it is all a wonder
Could be but a lie for profit
Are we even awake?
Are we dreaming all this?
We will never truly know
Till the truth unfolds. -
In this nightmare
Is that me
The wanderer in the distance
Lost within the chaos?
Am I strong weak
A normal peasant upon us?
I say all for in the end
Its not real. -
The end is but a new beginning
As one stops another starts
We may lose and lose again
But we may win in the end.
For there Is no true loser
We all are winners in this.
We all start again in the end. -
War has little meaning
It takes the poor and benefits the rich
It destroys our homes
It destroys our lives
Takes from us our hopes and dreams
Yet some support it through and out.
To me in my opinion..
War must vanish soon
For if it does not leave
War will consume
And war will take us away. -
BabyChocolate NewbieThese are really good. XD
If you dont mind could you check out my poems?
The title page is
Me Myself and I hehe -
Thanks for the feedback on them.
I'll check the poems soon for you. -
Babychocolate:they're good, in my opinion.
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BabyChocolate NewbieThank you!
Nothing compared to your's I must say -
Thanks, here's a new one.
Whisper all your fears
Tell me all your thoughts
Show me what you feel
If its what you want.
Show me all your pain
Know that I am here
To help you out, without a doubt
Remember I am here. -
In a world
Full of lies as this
Truth shall hide
Behind it all
Lies to cover
Truth to see
Lies uncovered
All around us
Life's a lie -
On this time around
I will not back down
For confidence surrounds the once
And focus is now my key.
I'll not give up
I'll not step back
I'll stand right here
Till I hit the ground.
Till I'm out of the fight
Till I've lost all my might. -
BabyChocolate NewbieWow these are really good!
The whisper all your fears one is something im going through now. -
Thanks.
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