poems
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Drowning in the pain
By: Shadys Angel (of course ~me~)
Drowning in the pain I cut my left
Vain as I drown deep inside I sit
And cry and deep inside I try to
Hide and each and ever night I want
To end my life.
But as I drown in the pain his face is
There I call his name.
Deep inside a girl who tries to hide
Is a girl who cant get by.
To my friends I am all but fine but no
Can see the pain in my eyes.
Drowning all the pain deep inside please
Someone just end my life with a sharpened
Knife.
Why must I hide?
Why must I cry?
Why must I be alive?
Why cant someone just drown the
Pain or just lock it all away and leave it
All for another day for this I can only pray.
But I guess I am on my own to fight the pain
Myself just waiting for the pain to die at the
End of my life. -
comment and tell me what you think just dont be too mean about it i actually live this poem (the boy is my "brother" he is actually my cousin who is in the marines and was called out on duty again -_-)
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I like it, it's great!
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thanks Veggie
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O: DUUUUUUDDEEE
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what?!?! whats wrong with the poem brooke??
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its here comment plz Slim
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D;
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what?? did you read the post after the actuall poem?? if not u need too it explains the whole thing
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..its erm lol very gloomy
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aw *wipes tear*
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yea its okaii though *hugs*
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the hug was to both of you
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Hugz
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i gotta go to lunch bbl
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