Warrior cats story contest
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Thread Topic: Warrior cats story contest
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Scourgelover NoviceSo the title says it all.
First place- a fanfic where you make the plot and characters.
Second place- a fanfic where I will make the plot and characters.
Third place- a quiz where you choose the topic.
Ends on Dec. 20! -
I'm doing the same one I did for the other contest.
I'm going to use my own OC
Name: Darestripe
Darestripe was out in the lush green forest of the Thunderclan camp looking for fresh kill when she spotted a bird on the rotton log in front of her. She got into position and waited until the right moment to pounce. As she pounced she smelled the scent of Twolegs and decided to investigate. She followed the scent and saw tons of the Twolegss monsters. She opened her eyes wide with terror as she realized what they were doing. They were tearing the forest apart. She ran through the forest and saw the Thunderclan enterence.
"Twolegs are tearing down the forest she yowled. All of the warriors stopped in there tracks and looked worried. Stripeheart went to warn Ravenstar about what was happening. Ravenstar stepped out of his den and walked out to the clearing. "We need other warriors to see if what Darestripe said is true." Ravenstar said. Ravenstar looked around the clearing. "I want my deputy Stripheart to go along with Darestripe, Thrushpelt and Mistyfur." Ravenstar announced. Darestripe led the deputy and other warriors to where the Twolegs and there machines were. "I will go warn Ravenstar and bring him here. Darestripe make sure the other warroirs stay here." Stripeheart said. Darestripe looked around after Stripeheart left and got curious but she had to obey the orders that Stripeheart had told her. "Can we please do something?" Thrushpelt and Mistyfur whined. Darestripe looked at them. "You can go hunt some fresh kill but don't go near the Twolegs." Darestripe said. Darestripe watched them run off into the forest near the camp. She watched the monsters tear down the trees that used to be full of fresh kill. "HELP!" someone yowled. Darestripe was startled at this and rushed toward the sound. Darestripe found Thrushpelt with his eyes full of terror looking at one of the monsters. Darestripe followed his gaze and saw Mistyfur was looked in a weird box. "Stay here!" she yowled at Thrushpelt. She ran toword Mistyfur with all the strength and speed she could handle. Before she could get to Mistyfur a moster drove in front of her and hit her. Even though the moster hit Darestrie she was still alive but barely. "I have to get to Mistyfur." she thought. She dragged herself across the yard and took all the strngth she had left to leap on top of the moster wear Mistyfur was at. She looked at the metal box and it looked like the box that had trapped Greystripe when he was deputy. Darestripe used her paw and pushed up the thing that was keeping Mistyfur inside and the box opened. Mistyfur ran out of the box and thanked Darestripe. "Please don't die Darestripe." Mistyfur cried out. "Get out of here while you can." Darestripe said her breaths getting shallower. "Thank you Darestripe." Mistyfur said. The last thing Darestripe saw before she died was Mistyfur embracing Thruhpelt. Darestripe died with a smile on her face. -
I wanna join!)
Get help! That was my first instinct, but I then remembered her request. "Darkmoon, this is insane!" She looked up at me with dark eyes. "I will do this myself!" She winced as aother wave of pain rippled her. The first kit slipped out, a she-kit. Two others came, but soon died. Darkmoon took her kit into loving paws, then cried out in pain. A fourth kit was trying to push out, one with so much rage on it's face it looked like a beast. When I told her this, she yelled: "Elkbeat! I wont make this kit suffer death!" After birth, the kit looked friendlier, but not much. The kit however was determined to keep his sister from getting milk. "Please!" I pleaded. Not to Darkmoon, but to her kit. "Let her eat." The kit hissed, and I knew despite my sister's pleas, I needed to do this. -
Bleeeh! mine sucks!
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Actually that is pretty good! XD
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Scourgelover NoviceIt's good!
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Scourgelover NoviceI think both of them are great! But I think SE is in the lead, sorry jinx blackclaw!
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Ok!
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I think Jinx did better.
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Thanks.
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