Can someone tell me if this character is any good?
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Thread Topic: Can someone tell me if this character is any good?
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Name: Ivan "Anastasia" Avilov
Gender: Transgender (biologically male, but in identity, female)
Family: Mother, Dominika Avilov (comatose), Father, Alexander Avilov (comatose)
Age: 26 moons
Clan: BloodClan
Rank: Shaman (healer)
Mate: N/A
Kits: N/A
Personality: Anastasia is a very sweet and loving cat when you first meet her/him and will show kindness to you as long as you show kindness to her. But deep down, due to past injuries and mental scarrings, secretly has a very dark mind and will sometimes reveal that on certain occasions, you just have to pay attention to her. One of the things that pleases her is giving her sunflowers, but giving her an even amount of flowers will cause her great offense and eventually will lead to her avoiding you. Seemingly innocent, but Anastasia's second personality (in reality, a mere voice in her head) is her past self, who was often depressed and had low self-esteem will sometimes cause her to have treason thoughts or her to act out of line. But overall, Anastasia is very nice, as long as you don't piss her off.
Brief History: Anastasia was born a male on December 6th, 2013 in a dark alley with his parents, Dominika and Alexander, living with several other families and litters of kittens and cats. He never hung out with anyone until a group of females approached him and asked if he wanted to hang out. Shyly, he accepted, and at first was very awkward with his new acquaintances. But he, eventually, over time began to grow close to these females to the point where he wanted to be one, himself.
He didn't voice this until after he and his friends went out for a walk one day. They found a half-frozen over pond and wanted to explore it. Ivan was the first to swim in the pond and within a couple minutes, due to the heavy pollution in the pond, his silver fur began to burn off. Scared, he swam back as soon as possible and broke into a bawling fit.
Helping him with his insecurities, Ivan's friends told him it didn't look that bad and used substitutes for the pink skin and patches on his body with just them huddling around him at all times to prevent as much attention as possible. When his fur grew back, it grew back orange, and this is when he decided to tell his friends that he wanted to be a girl. Eager, Ivan's friends all gave him previous accessories of theirs for him to wear. One gave a necklace, one gave a scarf, and one gave a sunflower. Gladly, he took them.
The same day, the group of close friends went to an earring shop and stole a couple of earrings for Ivan. They went back to their alley and tried to stick them on Ivan's ear. While sticking one in, a splinter got in the earring and caused a cut, making Ivan cry. After a few seconds, realizing how cool it looked, they put the other two earrings in. Then they all decided that Ivan should change his name to seem more feminine, and they all agreed upon Anastasia.
Soon after, the four ran away together and started to explore the world. It only took a couple of moons for a pack of wolves to attack them one fateful day. All of Anastasia's friends were killed, and Anastasia was left seriously injured.
Becoming depressed again, Anastasia traveled alone, looking for a place to stay. Nobody took her. She took whatever herbs she could find anywhere to try and heal her wounds from the wolves. While scratches, bruises and bites were healing, Anastasia soon began to show a level of interest in herbs and studied them while on the quest of looking for a home. By the time she became an expert, the wounds healed, leaving scars, but still, they healed.
Eventually, she found BloodClan, where she introduced herself to Requiem, the leader, and found her spot as the healer of the clan. She is now content with her life.
Fur: Formerly dark silver with black stripes, but currently cream-ish with a little white fluffy spot on the chest. White paws and a white tailtip. Over time, after being ugly, she became rather beautiful. It is hard to tell that she was once looking like a ragdoll.
Eyes: Pools of icy blue with tiny swirls of ocean blue around the dark grey pupil, lined with tiny, feminine black eyelashes. -
A bit odd nyan, but interesting.
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Scourgelover NoviceVery detailed. AND OMG BLOODCLAN!!! I LOOOVE BLOODCLAN!
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Son-of-a-b----.
That bio's even longer than my bios!
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