Musical Repartee
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Thread Topic: Musical Repartee
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This is for a kind of debate. There are these two groups,of two children each, one supporting healthy food and the other,junk food.
The lines have to rhyme. I've composed some of it, and I need to complete them ASAP! I have a few hours at the most....
Healthy: Hey ya lazy junk-eater!
You alone fill a two-seater!
Junk: Ola broccoli fan!
Try something tasty,
Pizza,burger,soda can,
Pasta,cake and pastry!
Healthy: Healthy food is tasty too,
Why don't you see?
Chips alone are liked by you,
Do eat healthy like me!
Junk: Eating carrot like a bunny
Is just a business funny!
Please someone help me out! -
it looks fine to me, what else do you need to add?
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I need a few more lines....
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Healthy: Carrots help your vision
which will give you more precision (?) -
That's nice but I also need to add in some humour
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hmm...
Healthy: Carrots help your vision
which will give you more precision
because the next thing you'll know
you'll run into a poll! (?) -
Know and poll??? I know I'm being a bit rude,and you're only trying to help me out... I'm sorry!
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oh my gosh XD no no, it's my fault, it's not rude at all.
I didn't sleep last night I'm... out there XD
kk let me think for a second... -
Oh I'm so sorry. It's ok,you can take your time!
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Healthy: Carrots help your vision
which will give you more precision
because if you won't eat carrots
might as well go off and be a ferret (?)
wow that was bad. -
At least you're trying! But I'll give you a hint, leave carrots!
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whoops late post again.
It's okay you have nothing to be sorry for, it's kind of my own fault for staying up posting and researching. -
But thanks for helping me anyway! I really appreciate!
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yeah, sure anytime!
Hmm... no carrots...
Healthy: Since you like things that seem sweet
perhaps we could meet
and have a healthy berry smoothie
that's really really grovie
or something along the lines of that? -
This is better!!
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