Need some feedback on this
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Thread Topic: Need some feedback on this
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"A life that's worth to give
A life that you feel inside
It's the life that we must live
The cold and lonely life
This love lost long ago
This love that I belong to
The same old story goes
That I can't live without you" -
wow
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"A life I cannot live
Chewed down until gone
Speaks for me and all I give
Sings for a truce I cannot let on
I've learned to live alone
I've learned enough of what I know
To be more than content and show
To being less than satisfied it am prone " -
* " I " not " it "
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Does this darkness have a name?
This cruelty, this hatred, how did it find us?
Did it steal into our lives or did we seek it out and embrace it?
What happened to us that we now send our children into the world like we send young men to war hoping for their safe return but knowing that some would be lost along the way?
When did we lose our way?
Consumed by the shadows...Swallowed whole by the darkness...
Does this darkness have a name?
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I've heard that before, in a music video. It was pretty cool.
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I told one of my friend they say I should go to a therapist and then jail
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Why? It's a beautiful quote, not scary ?
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I know
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I mean, do they think you'll become a murderer after you show them a "dark" poem
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I don't know
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Mhm! then that friend of yours needs a realty check
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nah there great every one different and there are nice in a crazy and murderer like kind of way but they do need that some times
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Oh I guess so.
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find or make any good poems lately?
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