Broken on the Ground

Thread Topic: Broken on the Ground

bananabread Junior

11 years ago

I'm collapsing
I am falling
I'm tearing into pieces
Yet I don't know why

Deep into the rabbit hole
of darkness and sadness
At the bottom of it all
Is an everlasting void

I was falling from the heavens
and I didn't even know
I can feel the air slip past my grasp
as I'm falling down
I never even noticed
until I lay broken on the ground

The rain washes over me
but it doesn't clean my wounds
I'm mud, dirt, blood, and broken bones
staying forever unclean

I can feel myself collapsing
I feel that I am falling
Being torn into pieces
And I want to know why

I was falling from the heavens
and I didn't even know
I can feel the air slip past my grasp
as I'm falling down
I never even noticed
until I lay broken on the ground

I have nothing to stop me
to catch me from my drop
Even both hands reaching
I keep falling
Further from the light

Falling from the heavens
Ending up broken in the ground
I can no longer see the light
Only surrounded by darkness

I'm still crumbling
I'm still falling
Still tearing into pieces
And I still don't know why
LuckyFirefly Experienced

11 years ago

This is a good poem! I think songs sound better with a ryne, but as poetry this is amazing!
bananabread Experienced

11 years ago

Thank you Luck I wrote it two months ago and I just now found it in one of my notebooks

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