Just some poetry~
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Thread Topic: Just some poetry~
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Death of a star,
Recorded yet lost,
In the void of Humanity,
It is there yet it is not.
A thousand lies and unspoken dreams,
Causing our lives to rip at their seams.
They say we're all right,
We're not broken,
Or lost.
But do they know,
Our most darkest of thoughts?
They call us children,
Lost in our despair,
Like GoldieLocks and the Three Bears!
We search for something right.
We avoid the things that are wrong.
Or the other way around,
Singing our insane songs.
Our wrists held too tight,
With our heads bowed too low.
No one is there to help us,
And no one ever shows.
We know that you are there,
For we are not blind,
Just far too many,
Gruesome thoughts on our minds.
Bother us and we anger,
Damage us and beware,
But if you dare try and help us,
You'd pull us back to despair.
This repetitive state of mind,
Is not fixable or destroy-able.
Though we try our best to stop it,
It is far too very strong.
Pushed back into the emptiness of our minds,
We have lost all thought,
Leaving love behind.
Cold eyes against a warm face,
Eyes not so properly placed,
A knife in our hands,
You understand,
That we are not a disgrace.
With one solid move,
Wobbly yet swift,
Your life will end,
Our last and final wish.
On the brink of Evil,
Our Insanity breaks,
And all our thoughts of love,
Are instantly erased...
...I don't even think I can comment on my own writing...o.~ It seems a little unbalanced to me~ -
...Only you Geek...Only you...
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45-48 spell YOOO
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...*facedesk* Did you find the TWO in there yet? -.-
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I found ACT.
I like it. You have great taste, my dear. -
Has my poem become a word search? XD
Thanks btw~ -
7-9 TWO
11-13 BOT
16-20 WOSOW, Palindrome
Line 6 last 4 words, fist letter of each spells RATS -
Pretty good. You've got talent. And yes, it is now a word search
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Well, I'm going to ignore the fact that my last poem became a word search so...Here's so poem I had to write in English (I had to use certain words so it's not exactly how I'd like it).
Her feelings were resilient.
Always coming back.
Depression,
Obsessions,
Neglection,
No one was there help.
She needed something vital-
Vital to survive.
She didnt know what it was,
And thus began to cry.
She felt as if nobody loved her,
She felt as if nobody cared,
As if she had been cursed by a warlock,
Invisible and unheard.
She was always so timid.
She was always so very kind.
But yet, she had very horrible thoughts on her mind.
She was always being convicted,
Of things she wished she had not done.
Because this very poor soul,
Was afraid of what it had become,
All she did was wait,
Waiting for the sun.
But the sun had never showed,
She just kept waiting,
Waiting her life away.
They told her to stay quiet.
They told her to stay There!.
But she would never listen,
Invisible and unheard.
Invisible and unheard she walks,
Down the lonely street.
Waiting for the sun,
The sun that never repeats.
Always lost,
In the darkness of the night.
Her only companion,
The comfort of a knife.
Invisible and unheard,
She walks the lonely street.
No one there to hear her weep,
No one there to sweep away the darkness.
This very poor soul!
Scared and helpless!
What has she become?
Does she know who she is?
Does she know what she has done?
Maybe she does not!
Maybe she doesnt care!
Maybe to her Good was an elective!
But does that mean,
The thing that we all bare,
Will be named after her?
Invisible and unheard!
Invisible and unheard she walked with a scowl upon her face!
Until her very death!
It was only then they listened,
To the very words that she had wept on the verge of her death,
Help me now! I shall not leave!
Save me from below!
No one helped her,
Because nobody cared.
And Insanity
Fell below
*Yeah I know, it doesn't have to best rhythm but, I had to use certain words so...Yeah :3 -
You are very talented
PS. I found HAD, 'TIS, and WIT -
*facescreen* If we could re-name threads, I'd re-name this "Rilok's PoemSearch". XD
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Yep XD
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:O I just thought of the best thing...I'm going to try writing something that's actually positive...This is going to be reallyyyyy hard. XD
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Reverse the first letter if the second word in the last 3 lines for BIN.
Maybe she does not!
Maybe she doesnt care!
Maybe to her Good was an elective!
But does that mean,
Last letters are teen.
Because this very poor soul,
Was afraid of what it had become,
All she did was wait,
Last letters are LET
Does she know who she is?
Does she know what she has done?
Maybe she does not!
Last letters are SET -
You're enjoying yourself there, huh Geek? Gotta love 'em PoemSearches...>.
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