How Broken Can I Get?

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Thread Topic: How Broken Can I Get?

• CastingAnchors Newbie

  11 years ago
  How
  Could a beautiful and simple masterpiece be
  Broken,
  Like shards of glass and threw away like it was nothing?
  Can
  the masterpiece start again? Or is it impossible to feel the same again?
  I
  don't understand, what did I do wrong? Could anything
  Get
  any worse?
  
  My life is a tragedy, a facade, and you're the one watching as the script unfolds.
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  barberbob2 Senior

  11 years ago
  Not sure if this is a cry for help or well written.
• 

  NekoTorix Junior

  11 years ago
  Pretty good. I like the description.
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  bananabread Novice

  11 years ago
  *applauds*
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  luvHungerGames2 Novice

  11 years ago
  Its Good!!!!
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  ange Experienced

  11 years ago
  Very good! You're talented and should be very happy with that poem. I loved it and you should too :)

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