what do you think of this fable i wrote.
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Thread Topic: what do you think of this fable i wrote.
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There once was a white Persian cat named fluffy. She lived in a huge mansion. She had a private room with a huge bed and tons of cat toys. She ate and drank out of gold bowls. She was groomed constantly. She had many brushes/clothes and diamond callers. Her life was perfect! Then, one day, her owner came home he had a dog in her arms. His name is coco she said. Fluffy hated coco. She wanted to be the center of attention. She was very mean to coco. She called him names like Stupid ugly smelly mutt. And would not share toys with him. The name calling and meanness made coco sad. He did not understand why fluffy was so mean to him he did nothing to her. Then one day fluffy was outside playing with a big red bouncy ball it was one of her favorite toys out of the many she had. Coco watched her out the window wishing that fluff would be nice and let him play with her. He wanted to be friends. Fluffy swatted her ball and it bounced onto the street. Fluffy went to get her ball. Then all of a sudden a car came speeding down the street towered her. She was so scared she couldn’t move. The car was going almost sixty miles per hour. Coco saw what was happening and started running as fast as he could. He grabbed her and pulled her off the street just as the car came by and popped her ball! Her heart was pounding. Then Fluffy said omg that ball could have been me. I could have been killed. You saved me thank you you’re pretty cool. Coco said wow that was close that car just missed you. Good thing I grabbed you in time. Fluffy smiled sweetly hugged Coco and sad. Thank you so much for saving me. You’re a hero. Let’s be friends. Coco said. Ok all be your friend but no more name calling. Fluffy said ok I’m sorry for all the name calling and meanness. I just wanted all the attention and I didn’t really know you but you seem cool. You’re a good friend. Coco said I’m so were friends now. And from then on Fluffy and Coco were nice to each other. They played together. And Fluffy never called Coco names ever again.
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lol its for english.
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FLUFFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dats my nickname!!!!! -
I think it's pretty good, saralee. :)
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cool.
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lol Fluffy
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