Autumn
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Thread Topic: Autumn
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This just came out of my mind so uh enjoy..
Twelve year Autumn Moss lives in a struggled life. With a father who doesn't even talk to her, or remember her name. A dead mother who she has never got the chance to meet. With her bipolar disorder, kids make fun of her. Autumn is a lonely girl with no friends or love. When Autumn was younger all she wanted was to find her mother, until her father finally shouted at her, "YOUR MOTHER IS DEAD!!"
Ever since then Autumn has been a bully to those who talk trash about her. Other then being a bully, she doesn't talk to anyone. In this story, Autumn is trying hard to find someone who would love and care for her.
Some characters:
Autumn- A lonely young teen that bullies those who bother her. She's very quiet and smart. Makes no eye contact with anyone. Cover he eyes with her bangs and wear long sleeve clothing. On hot days she would just wear short sleeve clothing but hide away from anybody.
What stinks about Autumn is that she has bipolar disorder. Her classmates obviously know that, which is why they bully her. Autumn is an amazing artist and can draw anything from head to toe. Her creativity is kept secret and no one shall know. Well not for long.
What Autumn looks like:
(she hides her face)
Eyes: Dark forest green with a small mix of brown.
Hair: Long, brown, silky, and naturally straight.
Nose: Small, like a button
Lips: Soft, light pink.
Skin tone: Light olive, a little tan.
Body figure: UNDERweight
Height: Short
Age: Turns thirteen in Autumn
Scenes:
"Autumn do you know the answer?" asked Mrs. Fizz.
"It's five" replied Autumn quietly.
"What?"
"Five.."
"Five?"
Autumn nodded.
"Okay that's the correct answer, good job. Remember to speak up louder though."
"Yeah Autumn! Speak up" shouted Derik. Who is sitting right next to Autumn.
"Shut up!" hissed Autumn.
"Make me."
And with that, Autumn took Derik's pencil and broke it in half, and started poking him with the ends really hard.
"Ow!"
"Derik please pay attention." Mrs. Fizz snapped.
"But she--"
"I don't want to hear, I've had enough of you getting yourself in trouble every day and I don't want you to interupt out math lesson! No get your pencil out right now and start writing down the answer for number seven."
"I don't have a pencil anymore"
"What?"
"Autumn took it and broke it in half, and started poking me real hard at the ends."
"Autumn... is that true?"
Autumn nodded.
"Then see me after class."
"Haha!"
"Derik stay quiet!"
"Loser" scolded Autumn.
"It's your fault." hissed Derik.
"No, because of your existence aa--hole I'm getting in trouble!"
"Did you just call me an--"
"Derik do you have the answer for number seven? Or were you too busy bothering Autumn?" interupted Mrs. Fizz.
"Uhhh, two?"
"No, that is incorrect."
"But... isn't it right?"
"She said it's wrong dumbwit." whispered Autumn behind him.
"Shut up Autumn! You're just a miserable little girl that nobody likes! All you do is show up and act stupid! You're not even cool! Just go to that place you call a hideout and burry yourself there!"
"Shut the hell up Derik! You're just a dumbasss that can't even solve a damn math problem but can solve the difference between miniskirts so you can look underneath and find your future THERE."
This time Derik is blushing.
"That's enough!" scolded Mrs. Fizz
When class was over, Autumn remembered she had to see Mrs. Fizz after class.
"Autumn come in," said Mrs. Fizz softly.
"Sweetheart what's wrong? I know you've been bothering the students here and that they have been doing the same. That your father never shows up. That your mother passed away when you were younger..."
"You know my mother?" asked Autumn.
"Yes..."
"How?"
"A long time ago... want to hear?"
Autumn nodded.
"It was when we were little. Me and her were playing in the sandbox and these bullies came and started bothering me, so your mom stood up for me and those bullies never bothered us again. Ever since then me and your mom have been bestfriends."
Autumn said nothing, but looked down on the floor.
"Autumn?"
Autumn still said nothing.
"Um you can enjoy your snacktime now."
Autumn got up, and went to that hidding spot Derik just had to announce to the whole class.
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like i said... TOTALL EPICNEZZZZ!!!!!! :D
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Hehe thanks! ^^
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um u should make part 2
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Wow, that was really good! And Autumn is a beautiful name for the girl. :)
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Thanks :)
@Rosie: I love the name Autumn also ^^
@Ozzy: I might... later on.
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