My Story
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Thread Topic: My Story
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so heres how this thread works, when i feel like it i will post a part of the story starting now
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ok
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My name is Ruri Ayasegawa, the 1st seat of squad 11and today was my first day in the WOL (world of the liveing) in 10 years. when i died all i can remember is leaving my poor cousin Eloisa, me and her were born together and were never seperated since. i was so convinced she was dead without me until my first day at ernie pyle middle school.
"witch class it again?" i asked my freind Ikkaku as he walked me down the halls, "you have to know that if your gonna ever do good in this school!" "why are you here anyways?" "i have to act like your dad idiot". I rolled my eyes and finnaly found my first class, "well bye skinhead" i said walking in "for the last time dont call me that you little maggot!" "oh god do i need to tell yachiru what you just called me?" i said with a pouty face. ikkaku turned around and walked away with his ee twiching, i sighed and turned around just to see a girl straight in my face, "hi ime eloisa!" the girl screamed, she had short brown hair light blue eyes and a black headband that was made from alot of fabric. this must have been my cousin!
(eh im tired so i type a litte more tomarow i know it sucks but its just so i dont forget it all when i really whrite it down, oh and if you have anny sugestions for the story post them here and ill see if i can add them or change smth but for now bye! ^-^) -
(That's really good for a first part! In the first part of a story, you have to work the hardest.)
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"Salas?" i asked, "um yah, but how did you know that?", i freaked out for a few seconds but finnaly maneged to spit out "goood gess?". Eloisa shrugged and looked at the boy across the room then back to me, "i think you need to meet Anthony!" she said with a smile. Before i could stop her she pulled me twords him, "Ruri this is by freind Anthony, this is Ruri", he nodded and looked back out the window, for some reason this made me angry. "hey are you even gonna say hi?" i said pokeing him, he did'nt look back but all of a sudden i felt a strange spirtual preshure. I ran out of the class and tried to use my soul reaper pass but got distracted to see the boy running to, he got passed the corner and out of veiw. I dident think mutch of it and soon got out of my body, i told my mod to stay at the school and do my work for a little wile, "but why!?!?" she wined, i answered that with a swif kick to the head and used shunpo to get to the hollow.
When i got there the spirit energy i felt was gone "what the?" i said outloud, before i could look around i saw that quiet kid that i saw earlyer. "HEY KID!" i screamed out, he turned around and i saw he was only a substitude soul reaper opon realizeing this i flashed over there. "where did you get your powers?" i asked with a searious look in my eyes. -
The boy stood wide eyed, "what is your problem?" i asked tripping him, he fell going twords the ground "oh right were in the air, s---!". I went flying twords him only to see him relece his sword, "wisper, Mattaku no shijima (dead silence)" then he pointed it at me and i couldent hear annything, "HEY!" i screamed out but i couldent hear my own voice! Then the boy raised his hand above his head and my ears started ringing and hurting like crazy! There was a ringing louder then two swords crashing together after running for two miles! I couldent hear it but someone screamed "Hinagiku Bigon Lilly i regect!" and a blue spirit energy formed a sheild, i could hear again, but who was that standing infront of me? "looks like you two got off on the wrong foot" eloisa stated. "you have powers?" i said getting up.
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"ever scince i was 5 and my cuz died" she answerd takeing down the sheild, Anthony walked up to me and held out his hand. I reluctently shook it and he pulled me in for a hug, "oph" i spit out as he knocked the air out of me, "dont worry he did the same to me when we first battled". He let go, "your not a substitude are you?" i asked, "no, im in squad 11 but ive been here so long i think everyone has forgot about me so im not going back" he replyed. "but our caption!" he just looked away "come on ill take you back or ill let you meet ikkaku!" there was a slience "maderame?" he asked, "umm yah ill take you bolth to meet him!"
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