Warriors: Cavernclan
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Thread Topic: Warriors: Cavernclan
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(Wow, you just gave me an Idea! Can this character be a Kittypet to the twolegs who captured Graypaw?)
Name: Snow
Age: 8 moons
Gender: She-Cat
Rank: Kittypet
Apprentice: None
Looks: Bright white fur, with blue eyes. Has a Blue collar with a small bell on it.
Personality: Shy, sweet to those who know her.
Other: She lives in a nearby Twolegplace with a few Twolegs, and her Twoleg's yard is right next to Sasha's Twoleg's Yard. -
This character is if course all your idea, but i am going to make a conic about a romance between a clancat and a kittypet. But the kittypet was supposed to be almost EXACTLY like the one you made up here, except that her name was supposed to be snowy and nit snow. Who's going to get her? XD
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Funny, and a Coincidence.
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Here's a drawing of what Snowy's going to look like in the comics, though i forgot her bell -_- :
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Cute!
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(The first page is done, i am now working on the cover. I'll give you the link once it's published! And sure, she can be pet of the same twolegs)
Graypaw/Sasha: The monster stopped, and Graypaw in his den got carried out, and was placed in a twoleg nest. The window was open. (He doesn't know what a window is, though) A brown tabby She-cat with blue eyes appeared in front of him, when he was trying to escape. "You aren't going to get out of there." She laughed. "But i will!" Graypaw yelled. "You are just a kittypet, of course you can't break out of here!" The she-cat felt a bit offended and stared at him for a while, until she said. "No one escapes, not even you. They will have to let you out." "Who!?" "The twolegs, of course! My name is Sasha, yours?" "Graypaw." "Oh, you are an apprentice!" "Huh? Do you know what an apprentice is?" "Yes i do. I actually almost joined a clan, but the wild is nothing for me." "Dishonorable..." "You'll get used to a confortable life soon enough, just realax!" Sasha meowed friendly. "But my clan will come to save me!" "I shouldn't count on it if i were you." "Pah! My clan is loyal to me whatever happens!" "Sure..."
Nighttail: Nighttail walked back to the camp. Her legs hurted and needed some rest. But she found no one there. She looked around to find anyone, and she found Oakstripe with two apprentices. "Where is everyone?" She meowed hoarse. -
Yay! The cover and the first page is done! Here's the link to the cover, link to page 1 is in the discription:
I hope you like it! :3 -
(It's great!)
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(I'm gonna use kittypet term for Snow)
Snow: I woke up from my nap, hearing a cat meow out, "... loyal to me whatever happens!" I've never heard that cat before. Wonder who he is? I stand up, stretching. My small yellow bell attached to my blue collar jingles as I move. I walk out of my small bed, and into the front room. I see Sasha standing by the window, talking to a cat in a carrier. "Hey, Sasha! Who are you talking to?" I meow, getting Sasha's attention. -
Oakstripe: I hear a voice behind me say, "Where is everyone?" I turn to see Nighttail standing behind me, looking confused. I look down, feeling mad with myself. Why didn't I hold on tighter? Why didn't I attack that twoleg like breezepaw did? I choke out "Graypaw has been... He's been captured by twolegs!"
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(I did a picture of Oakstripe and Nettlestar on that site. Look up Rave098, and you'll see it. I did not do good.)
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(I reacted :3)
Sasha: I heard the voice of my friend Snow. "Some cat who's really full of himself." I meowed back with a smirk. Graypaw tried to bend the door of the carrier with his teeth.
Nighttail: Nighttail sat down and curled her tail around her feet. "Don't worry." She said calmly. You know, i met a kittypet once. What was her name again... Uh..." She thought for a while. "Sasha. Yes, Sasha. She was do small back then. I think she is as old as breezepaw and dawnpaw now. I learned a lot about kittypet life because of it, and i told her about clans... I know i shouldn't be talking to kittypets but i am definitly not thinkin of becoming one. Anyway, my point is..." She paused for a moment. "Even if he can't get away from there, the twolegs will let him walk around on his own at a certain points. And knowing how purposeful Graypaw is, he'll return immediatly. She layed down tiredly. -
Snow: I walk around so I could see the inside of the carrier. "You can't break out of that, you know." "I WILL!" yowls the cat, biting the carrier door. "Who was his owner before? What's his name? Did he says?" I ask, wondering who the cat was. "He says he came from the clan in the forest, and he says his name is Graypaw." Replies Sasha.
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Clan: "But he needs to come back! Maybe he'll get used to a comfortable life! Or he'll go to the cutter! He'll never be the same!" Breezepaw meowed in panic. "Patience, young one." Nighttail meowed calmy. "I had to learn the same thing when i was younger. I know it's hard, but patience is important as a warrior. Breezepaw looked down at his paws.
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Nettlestar/Oakstripe: "She's right." Says Nettlestar, walking up from behind, with Ravenmoon at her heels. "We'll all need patience." Mutters Oakstripe, looking at Ravenmoon. Ravenmoon had a anguished look on his face, and he seemed full of worry. "Lets go back to the caves. I need to do something." meows Nettlestar, walking towards the entrance, but she stops for a second, looking at Dawnpaw and Breezepaw, "Don't say 1 word about the secret tunnel to any other cat. Got it?" Nettlestar says with a hint of menace in her voice.
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