My poems
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Thread Topic: My poems
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Evermore
Nevermore
Nobody cares anymore
Death
Demise
All these people I despise
Desire
Deserve
Many people will live to serve
Deprive
Despise
People spread their lies
Polluted
Poison
Nobody has a reason -
You used "despise" twice :P. But other than that, that is kinda weird and dark. Like about everyone living to serve. What does that mean?
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I noticed the despise thing. But eh.
Everyone serves a purpose in life -
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Don't wanna lose this threa
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There are many things in the world
That come and go
There are many things you don't notice
Till it's finally gone
So embrace everything
Enjoy the time
What you have now
You might lose forever -
The second one seems less dark than the first one. Both are good, though.
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Your good at this.
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**YOU'RE**
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