So, this is a story I'm working on.
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Thread Topic: So, this is a story I'm working on.
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Chapter 1: Perry
As I walked home, I couldnt help from wondering who my father was. I didnt have much of a clue, with my mothers reluctance to talk about him, and the fact that I was a spitting image of my mum... besides my brown hair. My mother, Melanie Coe, had blonde hair, fair skin, brown eyes and was pretty tall. I looked just like her 16 year old self. Mother always said that my father had left me. I knew a few people in that situation, but for some reason I didnt think one of them was myself. As I approached our simple cream duplex, I decided to try something out that I had been working on. I tossed my backpack onto the somewhat low roof, and then hoisted myself onto a support beam. I crawled up, then jumped onto the roof and grinned. Now that was fun! I thought, climbing through my window. -
Ah! So good! Continue!
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Yes continue pleaseeee
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It's good :). I like it.
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:) Ah, Perenelle....good times, good times.
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Indeed.
Thanks so much everyone! I'll continue in a sec -
Now that I was home, I could regain comfort. I threw on a simple light blue tank top and some yoga shorts, like yoga pants, only knee-length. I took out my laptop, and lay down on my stomach, placing my laptop on my pillow. I reached over, pulling my headphones onto the bed with me and inserted them in the headphone jack, and began listening to some music. Ooh I need your love, babe. Yes you know its true! Hope you need my love, babe, just like I need you! Whoa- Perry! Wait a second that was definitely not part of the song. I stuck my head out my window to discover my best friend, Michael shouting my name and waving. I waved maniacally back, then hopped out my window onto the roof, then the sidewalk. Michael shook his head. You are bloody amazing, Perenelle. He muttered. I grinned, but he rushed on. What were you doing? I must have shouted your name ten times before you heard me! I blushed a bit. Oh, you know
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This is interesting. You're good! :)
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Yay!!!! Your continue
ima be your #1 fan and make sure you got some ideas if you stuck
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:D You make our soap look like the tiny parts. This is bloody amazing!
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Will you torture me anymore this way? Continue before I write the third part by myself! But please, put apostrophes outside of people's words, like "You are bloody amazing, Perenelle." Michael muttered. It's much easier to follow when you did that. Other than that, I love this! Next part now!
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Thanks Lizzy. Never could've done it without you :)
Sorry about that, Wolf. I'm copying and pasting from Word. Can't right now, Word isn't working.
THANKS FOR YOUR SUPPORT EVERYONE -
Oh, that's okay! Continue please!
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