your first poems
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the ones you wrote when you could barely write, the ones that you can only half remember and half read as if they existed in a dream. always pale, bold and inshadowed by your memory. the powerful words you wrote lifetimes ago, that shape your very being now.
write dem here -
Pink and blu
I luv yu
(Exactly how I spelled it..I have a poem book full of all the poems I've ever wrote. -
I wrote this when I was 3:
No matter how hard you try,
I will not die.
As blood and gore will be no more,
Unless you manipulate it.
Brothers turn on eachother,
Locked in bloody battle,
Never to escape,
Without giving me their soul to take. -
Run, little rabbit
They're after you
They want you dead
Run, little rabbit
You've been discovered
They all know
Run, little rabbit
Don't you see?
Your lies were found out
Run, little rabbit
You had the town fooled
Now they want revenge
Run, little rabbit
They're out for the kill
See what you did?
Oh no, little rabbit
They've got you!
Your life has come to an end
Oh, little rabbit
Maybe next life
You'll know better -
^^ This was only my first... I never really wrote poetry when I was little.
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I wrote this when to may dad when he was sick
I was two at the time
Roses are red, violets are blue
You are sick, and others are too.
SO QUIT COMPLAINING AND SUCK IT UP!!!! -
i actually wrote this:
i hate my sissy
with all i gots
her name is missy
i hate her lots and lots -
I wrote this when I was 5:
My dog ran away,
I am sad.
Then a month later when I found the corpse:
My doggy's body is dead,
I am sad,
Boohoohoo
yeah. i'm really bad at writing. my skills have pretty much stayed the same since then.
I am a bad poet,
Whoodidoodoo...
i wrote that one just now. isn't it f---ing awesome!? XD -
I first got interested in poetry when I was 8, this was my first one...
You said you'd be my friend,
Until the very end.
But you left,
And like a theft,
Stealing me heart.
How was letting you go smart? -
Haha, Cooper. Those poems are cute. ;)
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thanks. XD
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Actually... my first poem was this (now that I remember)
My heart has deflated
And sunken into a sea of blood
Which only flows when my heart is pumping
Grade 2 logic ;) -
I don't have my first poem, because it's in an old magazine that I left in Spokane. Yup, my first poem got published xD
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whoa. thats impressive. what was the publication?
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i've never made one,they sound boring(not urs)
i couldn't make one,it'd be stupider than stupid
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