A Poem By Me
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Thread Topic: A Poem By Me
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The tears that glisten and slide down pale cheeks,
Holding the hands of their loved ones, so weak.
Time that ticks by, couting down to the final hour,
Giving up everything and trying anything in their power.
But soon the golden heart stops beating,
And memories so wonderful are fleeting.
No more to be made, no more to be shared,
And you look back now, realizing how much you cared. -
I wrote this poem because my grand-father died recently, and I didn't know how else to think about it other than writing.
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*hugz* sorry about ur grandfather dying btw it was a great poem
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Wow, that's an amazing poem! So deep and heart felt, you've got very good talent. =)
I'm sorry about your grandfather dying, but I'm sure he's in a better place now. -
whoa that smooth and powerful, encoure!
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