Please critique my technique.
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Thread Topic: Please critique my technique.
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My New Year's resolution is to become a better artist. I want to be able to come out of my comfort zone and try things I haven't before so I can learn and grow as an artist. And so, I'd like you guys to help me out.
I want you to click the link below and critique my technique. Critique the guidelines, the sketching, lineart, everything. That way I know what I'm doing wrong and what I need to fix. Please also critique the final result, if you could. How's the anatomy? The shading?, etc.
Don't sugarcoat anything. I won't learn anything if you do. Please be as honest as you can. Thank you.
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And here's the final result:
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Can't access the video
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Really? I thought the privacy settings were set to "public". I'll try and change that.
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Try this link.
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I don't like debunking your wrt. I feel like you have grown as an artist if you're doing this. I beg for someone to critique mine, my art no longer has any flavor. ;-; But as you wish.
HM, where should I start? It's not horrible, first of. I've seen WORSE. This is above average. It's a 6-7/10.
If you're going to do a tilting or bowing position, it should look a bit like a tilting position. My weakest area is proportionality and anatomy and I very well want to learn that because it is a difficult thing to do in art, I understand. The body should be more hunched, with the head a little down and the knee on my left needs to be my bended and the feet actually need to touch the floor. The arms need way more work and since hands are difficult as well, try sketching up some hands and feet. It'll be helpful.
The skirt looks like plastic, the person's hands would pull the edges out and it would have wrinkles like real cloth.
I find the shine in the hair unnecessary, but it sets a distinction between art styles and gives a unique twist to your own style. The colors are decent and there's no reason to add red flush to the character's nose and elbows since it deeply contrasts with the skin. I know that's very picky, but whatever. In overall, it needs a lot of work and so does your art but I'm really, really appreciative of the outfits you make and you have an extreme sense of creativity. It would just look great if you could improve in anatomy. -
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The highlights on the joints are very distracting in some of your drawing, I might add. Perhaps a peachier tone and some blending could help.
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Thank you.
And yeah, that red little thing I do to the nose abd the joints are just a habit. I feel like it makes the character look cuter, more youthful. ^^
But if you guys suggest I tone it down a bit, I suppose I could try that out. Expand my horizons a little bit. -
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All that exposition, for nothing.
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You need to work on anatomy and the eyes. The eyes look a little souless.
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?? I thanked you, though. What do you want, an entire 20 paragraphs about how appreciative I am?
Yeah, I kinda agree with you. I wanna draw better eyes. uwu -
YES.
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wants to help you practice hands sometime .3.
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