an anime made up in my head
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Thread Topic: an anime made up in my head
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ok, I did it
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you should have specified you were looking for people to help you e-e
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what o.o aren't you?
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what are you talking about? nvm, XD I embarrassed myself in offbeat
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Trying to help;
If this was an anime I wouldn't watch it. Truly, it's kinda overused (like ting said) and it lacks the slightest bit of realism. And it's too... perfect. There isn't an antagonist. I find that boring. -
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well, wolf also has an enemy, ( and the enemy could control demons and monsters ) and the enemy wants wolf dead, ( and, I dont know what to name the enemy! ) but anyway, he is kind of like a ninja, or something, he has a mask on, no one could ever see his face, and he could control black fire ( and, I will say more later! ) -
You shouldn't ignore the people who are trying to help you
This reads like a mary sue fantasy--and you really don't want that. It's....something you want to kill with fire. Repeatedly. In the head.
You need to make some changes if you want people interested. -
ok
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... I need someone to give me ideas! I just need someone to help me! I wont be able to make a good one without someone's help!!!!!!!!!! ;( I'm sorry I kind of snapped, but, people tell me what to do, but then they dont give out ideas that would make it better
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Welcome to the world of creative arts, where you don't get contructive criticism unless you ask for it!
didn't I tell you to make a thread asking for help?
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