Falling in Love with You (Part One) | Comments

Oh wow, I really liked this! :o maybe because the set-up of it is different or maybe because the driving idea is different, but it's great! Normally, I don't like when everyone is introduced all at once and everything, but I think you pulled it off quite nicely. Post-apocalyptic world = cool X) as well as tigers and jungles in NYC. Your writing style too I just love. Lots of variance in sentence structures, good use of participial phrases, prepositional phrases, dependent clauses, adjectives... oh, and grammar :) One question though, did you change Jake's name from Mario? So, great job, especially for your first one ever, and I do hope you'll continue!

Nice quiz, i adore jayden, i think green eyes are splenderous. I like your style, why not try writing a real novel, i bet it would be bestselling.

Nice quiz, i adore jayden, i think green eyes are splenderous. I like your style, why not try writing a real novel, i bet it would be bestselling.