Confinement Part 38 | Comments

WEB. FLAME. I missed them, and I love their conversations! The way they interact is priceless (in this one, I especially liked Flame's middle finger flipoff). What ever could Web be planning though... and please tell me we can see it in person. I will admit I just reverted slightly to brong a fangirl in this part xD glad to know I still have it in me I guess? Rave, the ever-observant, and we get to know so much more about him :3 me likey this personal time with him ;) the last paragraph - those metaphors *swoons at the melodious phrasings*

One thing I want to say before I continue; Please don't get put off by the size of this comment it's got a lot of emotions in it (Besides this is the longest comment I have ever wrote ever)

OH MY FRICKING GOD. Dannica this paragraph was absolutely beautiful I felt like crying! The time on the bed with rave was too good although I was bummed there was no lip action eh eh but all in all it was too cute

I didn't think your writing could get any better but it did! You're getting so good with your words and descriptions already and you're only fifteen? Oh my god. Imagine how good you'll be when you're twenty or thirty and start writing novels?! Rave was TOOOOOO CUTEEEEE IN THIS ONE OH MY GOODNESS I was having an attack I didn't know how to function aosbalswkow wow you are amazing

AGH RAVE KISSED MY FOREHEAD!!! :)) if rave just went a little bit lower my nose, i'd be a little more happy, if you know what i mean (wink, wink). now we get to see rave more, and i'm pretty happy! i miss flame and web though, so i can't wait to see them again!

MMMand excuse me! What happened to 'I want to make this series longer than the Beautiful series'?! E more parts to finish this? NO WAY not possible! And why?! Just because you're not as famous as Angelina Jolie or Justin Bieber? So what? The readers you have love you and your series to pieces. -t means so much to me personally that you would take your precious time and share your creativity with us and now you're leaving?! That's not right I love your series they've become a part of my life I mean 'Dannica gotoquiz google search' has become a routine; I can't not do it. The last time I read a book willingly was 5 years ago, I know. !ut these series are soo good if spielberg read these they would be a frickin blockbuster. Never give up and if you think there's no point, trust me there is you are very very talented and don't let 'less readers' put you off. You arr my inspiration dannica and I use you techniques in my English exams and whenever I get an A or A* I think 'wow. This is all because of you Danni, thank you' keep going, never stop xxx

IJFJDIIVNDNIDDINS RAVE I love tht OHMYGOD. But seriously, tht was an awesome chapter I can't wait till the next one I haven't been on here in forever (I really gotta change my username ugh)

Awwwwwwwwwwww! So cute! :D I'm cute, Rave is cute, this couldn't get any better! Great part, Dannica. I don't want it to end! :)

I'be been apart from gotoquiz for so long... but i got bored and suddenly ended up here again.... This was amazingg!!! as usual of course.

Rave is soooo cute omg!!!!!

oh my goddd My comment got deleted sorry! :'(

Next part danni!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

CONFINEMENT IS THE FIRST PART OF THE TRILOGY RIGHT MY HEART IS CRUSHING BEcause 2 more parts and no more :(((