Confinement Part 34 | Comments

AH! That was absolutely perfect, that was exactly what I needed to ensure my love to Rave :*

I could really just picture us in the closet with his shirt off and me trying to not to pass out while he's seriously wondering if I'm okay with no snarky tone in his voice oh my goodness Rave is such a tease!

And as I read that part where he smiled sexily and said that comment about fire alarms being too easy made me melt a little bit *swoons*

Okay, next part:

I think it's nice that Tallon thinks I'm nice and that he feels for me; but then if he was forced to go to school, why wasn't he in chemistry? :o

And why does he have a different form adviser, when Web supposedly caught him in the Charger Hall Lobby?! Tallon is totally in something deep!

Oh Sebastian -___-

He is bonkers, I tell you, and you, Dannica, are surely not afraid to flaunt it! If Hef IS using magic to protect his scent, where is he getting the magic from?? This part was incredible, Happy Easter to everyone!

Great part! I got a very nice mental picture of Rave ;). I hope that they save the little girl in time. Sabastian, he's just a crazy person. Carnation and the others need to get away while they still can. And so does Hef. When it comes to Tallon, I haven't the slightest idea what's going on with him... I appriciate how Flame is trying to help him, and I hope that he gets his confidence built up. At the same time, the voice in his head at the end was just plain creepy. Wow, you do such a great job developing the characters and the plot. Excellent work as always. :)

I don't have that much time to comment.And i think this is a late one too. So i am terribly sorry.

OMG!!!!!! ! Well i am very interested on what is going to happen next. Rave is right, the main character is becoming really annoying with all the 'oh my gosh the torture!!!'. But hey at least she will mature. Hey when is she at least going to learn some new power... It feels like Rave won't be enough between her and Sabastion. Holy snicker doodles. This is tooooooooooo gooooood!

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! :D

OMFG, OMFG, OH MY FRITTERS AND GUMBO *trying not to hyperventilate... or die* see, the problem is that I'm at school, and trying not the laugh, smile, or die while reading this utter perfection of a story (and utter perfection of a guy ;) ) is extremely, extremely difficult. I ended up biting my thumb to stop myself from smiling; so bad, but sooo good - the writing. The description. The characters. The plot. I know, I know, I rant and rave over your writing about... every time I comment XD so that's about 100 times in a row, but I swear, it's still true every time. Your story is completely breathtaking, Dannica. After Beautiful Secrets, I believed you were going to have a hard time eclipsing that success and beautiful-ness, but I think you have o.o You seriously keep getting better and better and better; I just can't imagine... you're such a good writer, Dannica x)

Did I mention I died like 32423 times while reading? I swear I was going to have a heart attack with the fire alarm part, and I was near about to bite my thumb off while reading about the dressing part because I was trying so hard not to smile like an idiot during class. UGH, that's torture xD That beautiful boy... smh...

Wait... what? I was supposed to like Flame or Web o.o Probably going to shift back sometime in the future ^.^' it's pretty inevitable with the amazing scenes you create. I canNOT wait for part 35, Dannica < 3 As for Tallon, it sounds like he's going crazy like Sebastian o.O OMG what if they're related??? And the cat! Rave noticed the cat! What did the man do to him >:( my room??? Gah. I just need more XD

Oh
My
God
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I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MOMENTS WITH RAVE FOR LIKE EVER AND IT TOOK UP MOST OF IT OH MY GOODNESS THANK YOU DANNICA YOU HAVE MADE MY LIFE COMPLETE I AM DYING

Ahem
Anyw ays

I thought Tallon was adorbs because he took up all his strength just to say hello aw but then that growl towards the end that left me kind of weirded out 0_o

And I have no idea what is going on with Sebastian I think Hef kind I knows that he's after him or something? I don't know this is weird but thank you Dannica this part will get me through the year thanks omfg

(me covering my mouth as i picture rave changing...) THANKS A LOT DANNICA, NOW I'VE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH RAVE! i can't stop blushing bc i still see him doing it! AHH! die sebastian! save the girl! kiss rave- oh wait, nut, um... no one heard that!

Wow. My comment is much longer than I thought it would be...

Omg! Rave is so hot!

whY Dannica WHYY. I CAN'T NO NO NO IM DONE NO NO BEFORE I WAS ALL LIKE 'OOOO FLAME ;D' BUT THEN THAT AND THE SWIMMER BODY (I'm a swimmer so..) AND NOW IM GETTING HEADACHES HAPPY EASTER THANK YOU JESUS BUT I DON'T KNOW ANYMORE GAHHHH I JUST