Confinement Part 13 | Comments

This is the action one... and we're going to the cafe... oh boy... how's this going to happen? I hope I'm not going to get attacked o.o *crawls up in a cave* Brynn scares me... nooo don't enter the alley! >.< ... random kid in an alley right after suspicious noises and this is Dannica's story. Either A. The disappearance of his mom is connected to what's going on or B. He's an evil shapeshifting changeling demon! O.O omfg... that is, eeechhh *shudders from description* See! I knew it was a monster! (kinda)

QOD: If I were in that situation, I would've been deeply suspicious. I mean, creepy CREEPY noises in an empty alleyway followed by a lone kid. It reminds me of this episode of NCIS where the killer put some kind of kid's toy that made noise to lure people into in alleyways and abandoned houses... Have you seen NCIS? Abby is awesome ^^

Ok um trust me when I say I can come up with something worse then what happened in the story XD. I actually loved this part cause of the violence.

QOD: Ok, well I wouldn't help Jeff because It's a little weird for a kid to be in an alley even if the kid did lose It's mom, or dad. That's just me though. I would have examined the kid for a bit trying to be unnoticed, then just walk away like nothing happened.

I really have nothing else to say because if I even talk about it I just might throw up as well. So Question of the Day: If you saw Jeff crying in the alley with a toy in his hands, what would you have done? Well the moment I saw him and everything about bad guys and magician knew a was a little suspicious. But I was still heart broken so I wouldve tried to help. But the moment when he said what kind of fav horror movie he liked I would have thought - I knew it. And try to let go of his hand and said: "quick come on I have to get somewhere and I don't want to be late" and if he comes at me or gets even near me or threatens me in any way I would have run.... Ohmysweetgoodness.. .. *takes a deep breath* that was just: EWWWWWWW!

I would've done the same thing to be honest. ._. But I wouldn't hold his hand. I don't hold hands. Especially with little kids, I don't mean to be rude, but who knows where they've been?!

@Aria It's nice you like Rave too, but hun, he's mine. :) I already made our couple name and planned our kids will be Raven, girl, and Terance, boy. :) So yeah, I think he belongs with ME! >:) *flips out all crazy*

My comment was removed :'( Maybe because it double posted. Well I'm just going to answer the question then because I'm lazy xD

QOD: If I read your part first, I'd be wondering if you were messing with my mind if I saw a Jeff. But then let's say I didn't read it. I just read a book where the murderer lures kids in and decapitates them. It's so freaky and he always gets away with every. Good book. I'd shout to Jeff if he needed help and NOT TOUCH HIM. But I wouldn't ever be in alleys. I watch too many movies and I feel insecure in my room afterwards, sometimes :)

This was wonderful g your wonderful. I kind of saw the Jeff thing coming. Wow, a little boy turning into a thing. Sorry I am tired so j wont make sense at all. I would of pulled away as soon as he said Scary movies!!! We'll This part was amazing as always, it was great

If I saw jeff I would leave him alone I mean how does a toddler end up in an alley? Anyways omg I love tht song!!! Even though im not allowed to listen to it lol my sis has it though! I jst started laughing and reading it in tht voice anyways it was awesome yay!!!!!!

WHAT A SNEAKY b------! Making himself look like an innocent little boy in need of help... He should be ashamed of himself! Damn Kroutins or whatever (I like to think of them as croutons XD) I THOUGHT YOU SAID THERE WAS GONNA BE MORE ROMANCE?!?! THAT WAS NEAR DEATH! NOT ROMANCE! I loved it though. You are just so amazing! ANYWHO! QOD: I have no idea... probably not because I already know that I see things that want tokill me and I'm very untrusting.

Imma answer the question of the day first: If I saw Jeff, I'd walk away, it's a strange thing. I mean, yeah I go to foster homes every Sunday and give homeless kids food every tuesday, but C'MON! That kid is downright scary.

Anyway, Look, RAVE! My hero XD Good part and I NEED PART 14 NOOWWW! Btw, I emailed you (=

I'm going to email!!! Hehe, anyone wants my email? It's: [no emails] - ok? Ya, let me try to email and I must warn, I have crazy things in my mind. I don't know why I didn't put it in the last comment below but.. I'm blabbing my mouth again?

I'd just crawled out of bed and my mom took me to take a shower since I spent 2 days in it because I was sick :s I wanted to read this part but my mom can be so forceful xD My timing sucks. Anyways, I knew something was wrong when Jeff started asking questions. But Rave came to save me like the good boy he is, I could get used to it :3

QOD: Well in common sense, if I read this part first, I'd be going like, "Is Dannica seriously messing with me now?" and run away. But let's say I didn't. I just read a freaky book about this killer luring people in and getting away with all the murders (decapitated bodies). It was really good. Anyways, I'd just shout whether he needed help or not and stay in the lights or something. AND NOT TOUCH JEFF. In normal situations, I wouldn't be in an alley anyways. I watch too many movies and sometimes, I feel insecure in my own room xD

I'd just crawled out of bed and my mom took me to take a shower since I spent 2 days in it because I was sick :s I wanted to read this part but my mom can be so forceful xD My timing sucks. Anyways, I knew something was wrong when Jeff started asking questions. But Rave came to save me like the good boy he is, I could get used to it :3

QOD: Well in common sense, if I read this part first, I'd be going like, "Is Dannica seriously messing with me now?" and run away. But let's say I didn't. I just read a freaky book about this killer luring people in and getting away with all the murders (decapitated bodies). It was really good. Anyways, I'd just shout whether he needed help or not and stay in the lights or something. AND NOT TOUCH JEFF. In normal situations, I wouldn't be in an alley anyways. I watch too many movies and sometimes, I feel insecure in my own room xD

@Tereasa22- I meant it, literally. I don't like Rave XD No hate or anything, i just don't fancy him

RAVE YOU CAME AND SAVED MY LIFE! I LOV- wait, can't go too far just yet... we still have to meet flame later!

QOD: i'd help for sure bc helping others is what i was taught to do...

Lalalalalalalalalal alala sing a happy song- sorry somehow my dad told me that he watched te original show of the smurfs when he was young.. ^_^

if i saw jeff, i would just walk away... u could never know it could be a trap! i feel like IM gonna barf after reading that!

PLEASE MAKE PART 14 I NEED IT LITERALLY!!! -.-

if i saw jeff, i would just walk away... u could never know it could be a trap! i feel like IM gonna barf after reading that!

PLEASE MAKE PART 14 I NEED IT LITERALLY!!! -.-

@Teresa22 I knew some writer I read made those references! Awesome ^^

@PuffBall no problemo, now I can email you... mwahahaha

@Aria seriously though, when I said that I didnt mean to be rude, I just really love Rave. ^o^

Anyways, good job. :)

@PuffBall try putting parentheses around the . of (.)com and then it should work

orianabs@yahoo(.)co m is that right? ok I sent the email and for me it's long on iPod!! :P I feel silly right now, ok I'm off to torture my mother, THANK YOU XXBLUTIXX! :)

Late post.
@Aria okie.

qod: i dont realy know i aint that muchfor kids but i might if i was in a good mood i might help him i gess

@Xxblutixx I love that show! :O I always made references in glas. ^-^

@Tereasa22- I know XD
@PuffBall- it says no emails XD