Coercion Part 3 | Comments

Oh my Redvines (What the hell can't they do?-sorry, Starkid reference) This was so Feel-Filled!!!

Oim ygayod a few parts ago when you described Sebastian with White hair, I automatically thought Anderson Cooper.

Anderson.
Freaking.
Cooper.

There is literally nothing threatening about him at all!

Why brain, whaiiiiiiii.

And in the bit of this part (That sentence sounds quite odd) where it mentioned how in your subconscious you sort of assumed you'd see someone like a wizard and such? I imagined Gandalf just like "YOU SHALL NOT PASS- Oh wait, hey Rave. Whazzup?" I must be over tired.

All in all your writing is so great and you just make my day!

(And I love it when you use strong vocabulary, I mean did you eat a thesaurus or something?)

I hope the end of your summer is going well and keep up the awesome-sauce work!

I finally caught up!! Rave is so UGH! DANNICA YOU MAKE ME MAD BECAUSE RAVE WON'T MAKE A MOVE YET!!

I could practically imagine how it was waking up on that plane *swoons*

And it was sooooo cute how he was talking about his favorite places :')

But Eliza needs to leave, who does she think she is I actually feel a strong dislike towards her but yeah, Rave went back to hug me goodnight! That was so adorable! Love this part, Danni, more!!

This is a great series!!I'm glad I decided to read this,otherwise I would have missed a lot!I actually wanted to comment on the other parts too.But knowing me I know I'm just too lazy to do that.well..I love Rave but you made Flame so damn good.ugh..why do you do this?!and yeah I know I love Rave but the thing is I can't help but feel something wrong about this feeling of mine...I-I'm just... sad,even to think about that..:(I don't know why I feel like this.gosh.it's so complicated!

I think I wrote too much, but your story is just so good!!

My comment got deleted!! :'( aw danni i did read it and commented about 'Britain and my land and rave feeeeels and stuff' i do love your writing and wouldn't miss is for the world especially after ive been nagging you for days! Haha love your writing

Hey danni I love your writing so much I have an app especially for your Gotoquiz page! Haha and also on wattpad I have my photo up so you can see what this olive skinned fan looks like :) keep writing pal xx

I'm just going to justify that Rave and I just went on a date okay? That was DEFINITELY a date! And that Savior not a Saint thing was brilliant I love Rave so much omg but I'm also still curious about Flame? Dying for more!!!

i can't stop thinking about the wonderful night i had with rave! but that almost ended bc of that (cough cough) eliza... YOU CAN'T HUG MY RAVE, NUH-UH! AND DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT BREATHING IN THE SAME PLACE WHERE FLAME AND WEB ARE! >:( she shall burn to the ground when i'm through with her! (pulls out flamethrower) BURN ELIZA BURN!

That was so great! I love having so much Rave time! Having him hug me is the best! Flame is nice, but I will still forever be on team Rave! :P

Dannica, girl! I lost my email so I kinda need you to email me back your email on hallo _ night @ hotmail . com without the spaces of course! xo

Love,
Ariaaaaa.

BRITIAN! Rave and I are dining on the food of my land!!! I totally love how you put that inthere and really love how rave's opening up to me and i'm actually seeing him as a normal boy - off duty

Eliza, eurgh what a clown. FAKE biatch i smell. What does she have to do with Rave? Did they used to go out? Did he have a cruseh on her? Or vice versa? Why did he seem so dreamy? Pigtails and boots - is she a cowgirl? What was the whole 'hug with kegs wrapped around him' is she a slut? Is she begging it off of him? ERMAGERD she's put a spell on him! No this isn't hogwarts, she's whateva cause Rave OBVIOUSLY LIKE ME, i mean otherwise, why would he ask me what i thought of her and why would he return after goodnight and BEAR-HUG ME HUH??!! That's right eliza i got a huuuuge hug and you goi as the italian would say 'Niente' that's right NOTHING

Loved it Danni, good job at making my feeling spark for Rave. Next part!!

I can't, I just oskanzjejsbsneis the feels omgerd