Bright Light in the Darkness Part Three | Comments

Bright light in the darkness, GinnyGirl: Oh wow, I didn't realize the main character was so young! And she's been traveling since she was 6, don't tell me that's how long she's been alone, because that'd be tragic ;'( When the shadow guy said "the Castle of Black", the first thing I thought was "SIRIUS!" then I remembered that this isn't a HP fiction XD awesome job tying in of the title there; very dramatic. Glowing soil... where we're sleeping, how did we not notice it before? Hope to learn what it is in part 4!

PLEASE Continue! It's really good!

This series is really intriquing and I can't wait for more! Fantastic effort :D

Part 4 now! I LOVE this series!