A Chance for a Second Chance Part 1 | Comments

I'm just guessing but are you rvelez? Your writing style is similar :)

I love the story line, the start is evenly paced and the cliffhanger was an actual suspense cliffhanger. Though I have a suggestion: place spaces between each sentence because sometimes my eyes are just too tired xD Also, if you run out of questions to fill because of a cliffhanger, you could turn the long paragraphs into two. The super long blocks kinda freak me out :D I hope you continue and I would love to see this series uh...blossom XD

This. is. AMAZING!! It's fresh and different from the usual storylines; it's nicely done and isn't rushed or too slow.

The was a TERRIBLE place for a cliffhanger. DX Well, good for you because it keeps us in suspense, but terrible for us for the same reason. XP PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! XDDDD Can't wait for part 2! *pulls in couch and mini-fridge to stake out new quizzes list*

Please continue. It was really interesting. Continue please. Pretty pretty please with sugar on top? 0=D

@ivoryleaf what?Me and Yo_whats_up are two different people...I hope you aren't confused

I liked it too, so please continue, possible stranger!

That was amazing! Make the next part super soon! Im positive its going to be a great story!

rvelez + Yo_whats_up: Omg ahahaha I'm so embarrassed. It's just that your writing styles are sort os similar and idk xD So sorry.

Omg..i love your storyline..it's unique part 2 please:)

Sorry, I meant to say *That* in the third line. XD

Lol we do?Maybe me and Yo_whats_up should be twins/sistersXD

Woo part 2

part 2 i relly wanna know happens next! =)