Your Strange Life at Hogwarts (Part 5) | Comments
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Much better than before. I liked all the parts. I think the part when we meet Oliver should have been a bit long. I sometimes feel you rush out. Be calm and strech the story as required.
Sonya twist seems interesting. I think she can provide us with the required information.
To sum up, I like your series. Waiting for the next part...
p.s. Continue with this format
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Yeah I did sort of rush this edition. I was almost late and I had to get off soon so I tried to wrap it up quick. As for Oliver, things will get longer, promise
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