When Will It Work? Part 1

Hey peoples this is my first story quiz. I worked really hard on this, so I really want to know what you think. If a lot of you like it I'll write the next part. If you have ideas just comment.

Character description: Danni: Your best friend, dirty blond hair, blue eyes, tan, very flexible. Austin: a good friend of your and Danni, blue eye, blond hair, well built, very sporty. Joey: Another good friend of you and Danni, jet black hair, black eyes, has really strong abs. Jesse: Black hair with streaks of red, athletic, fast, and flexible, deep dark black eyes you sort of know him from school but he's not very nice

Created by: Kat
  1. "Love me, love me, say that you love me. Fool me, fool me, oh how you do me. Kiss me, kiss me, say that you miss me. Tell me what I wanna hear, tell me you love me." The sound of your alarm at 6 AM. Your first thought is:
  2. You think "Ugh another school day" and start to go back to sleep, but then you remember, IT"S SATURDAY! You quickly jump out of bed, get a shower, eat a good breakfast, and get your camping gear.
  3. By the time you finish you hear I knock on the door. You say "Come in Danni!"She came in doing a backflip as she did, then she said "Hey _______" I said "Show off" She said "Okay if I'm a show off then I can leave and we won't go" You said "Okay fine. Did you get breakfast?" "Yup. It was good."
  4. You say "Alright then, let's go get Austin." Danni says "Ooh you wanna go pick up your cutie?" You say "Shut up. He ain't my cutie he's yours" She says "No he's not. Joey is" You say with a tiny bit of jealousy "Oh right The "˜lovebirds' " "Lol anyway we should get going before they start worry about us."
  5. The 2 of you walk out the door and end toward Austin's house. As you're going you see a flash of red and wonder what it was. You can't worry about it too much because you're at Austin's house.
  6. You knock and Austin opens the door, his white smile and blues eyes greet you "Hey _______! Hey Danni!" You smile at him and say "Hey Austin! Excited about our camping trip?" He says "Oh yeah, you can bet on it" You say "Cool. Everything packed?" "Yup it's all right here" He said pointing to 3 packs filled. Danni said "And how the heck do you except us to carry that?" "Lol, I thought you'd say that. That's why I packed another bag with just the things I needed. That's the pile of stuff I want." You say "Really Austin?" "Yup" Danni says "Well grab your pack we have to get Joey." You all head out the door to Joey's house.
  7. You start down the path again and you see another flash of red and then you feel something touch your ankle. You stifle a scream and Austin says "______ what's wrong?" You say "Oh uh I just thought I felt something" "He says "Oh okay" Danni says "______ you are such a worrywart." You reached Joey's house so you didn't have time to shoot back an insult.
  8. You walk up the gravel drive way and before you can knock Joey opens the door. He says "Hey guys!" Danni asks him "Every thing packed?" You were kinda disappointed because you wanted to ask him. He said "Yup it's all right here" You say "Okay cool. Should we get going then?" Everyone shouts back "YES!"
  9. You all walk out the door and start to head toward the woods. Suddenly you hear something. You keep walking thinking it was your wonderful imagination. You hear it again, you can make out more of what it's saying it sound something like "Phft." You stop allowing the others to get more ahead. Then you hear something like "Shh ______" you could swear you heard your name, but you ignore it and keep walking.
  10. You started down the path again, but suddenly something grabs you. You try to scream but duct tape is put on your mouth then your blind folded.
  11. And it's a cliffhanger! I'll get the next one out ASAP. Lemme know what you think.

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