Vampire Love Part 2 | Comments

Your story isn't that stupid, if you try putting more detail into it it could be way better than it is now. Great job and that is exactly what I would say if my BFF told me she was a vamp "What the hell?" LOL can't wait for Pt 3

I seriously don't think that it is stupid. Try not to rush so much and maybe add a few more details. Remember, nothing can be perfect! :)

LOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! haha, anyway, good quiz, just keep on putting in more details. but i can see improvement from your last quiz, that's for sure. good job and keep it up :D

Your story is good... but if you put more detail into it, the story will be great!

good show, jolly good show indeed.me lad your story was great!!

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