Unforgotten Secrets part 5 | Comments

STARFIRE! You're here too! Ahhhh =D I love her. Awhh Drake's brotherly concern is cute X) JAYDEN! You bet your chili cheese fries that you better come over here and comfort "me"... wow, starfire and her opinion smh XD

Anyway, enough of my disconnected reactions, I'm so happy I finally got to read this! It's been 2 days, TWO DAYS that I knew this was out, and I was SO SO so so sooooo tempted to read it

Noooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! How could you end it there?!?!?!?!?!?!?! ? Who is the mystery girl? Is it someone already in the story? *whispers to self* It can't be Sarah and I don't think it's the main character. It might be but it's unlikely. IS IT SOMEONE ALREADY IN THE STORY? Ps: please get the next part out soon.

*takes deep breath* okay I am done freaking out, I can't wait for the next part. Any chance you can get it out soon? Like today or tomorrow? I won't push it :), but I love this. It's really good, you should be so proud of yourself. (because your a good writer)well I am looking foward to the next part.

I hope it's Bella!! I herd singin234 does not like him for Bella or something. Singin234 is Bella right? So maybe Ash or Bella dumped you know. So maybe Bella is the girl?!?! Grr this is driving me crazy!! Please get the next part out soon. Your so amazing

OMFG THIS PUTS TWO OF MY FAVORITE STORIES INTO ONE I CANT TAKE IT GUISE I CANT! i can imagine Gumbo, White Fang, and Starfire hanging out and planning what to do to the guys ^_^

i bet ____ is the mystery girl...IT IS, ISN'T IT?! MAKE PART 6 PWETTY PWEASE? ON THE NAME OF JAYDEN'S CHILI CHEESE FRIES!!

It's finally out :) Not that I'm complaining. It doesn't matter how slow the release, as long as it doesn't stop. I once waited on a story that released one part or chapter every year. Recently it sped up. I really love it so I guess that's why.

Jaydenn. You're so cute :) I smiled so much when I was reading the part about Drake. It's like my brother's feelings...for me. Kinda. I will never know but he actually brought me up in a conversation with my dad. I'm actually really happy for no reason. Reading this made me even happier. It actually hurts when you start reading a guy's thoughts when he finds out a girl is crying. Or that it reveals his feelings. Idk if it's just me but guy P.O.V's always sometimes makes my chest tighten. I can't wait for the next part. When Jayden comforts me and then Alex becomes all jealous boo xD Alex. He's drifting away D: THE CLASHING OF THE TWOO. YEAH.

I hope Jayden is sweet in the next part. Or that there's Alex in the next part. I can't wait for the next part xD I wouldn't mind if Jayden is a rapist ._.

STARFIRE! You're here too! Ahhhh =D I love her. Awhh Drake's brotherly concern is cute X) JAYDEN! You bet your chili cheese fries that you better come over here and comfort "me"... wow, starfire and her opinion on rapists smh XD

Anyway, enough of my disconnected reactions, I'm so happy I finally got to read this! It's been 2 days, TWO DAYS that I knew this was out, and I was SO SO SO SO SO so so sooooo tempted to read it, but I had to quick write up some homework assignments I neglected over the summer >.> At least the wait was well worth it, this was awesome, and I can't WAIT for the next part because that will mean merging, and it's so exciting! X)

D: My comment got deleted. I'll try to use my memory since I'm not feeling lazy today :3

It's finally out :D It doesn't matter how long, just as it keeps going and doesn't stop. I once waited, still am waiting, on this story that updated each year. That makes 3 years already. But it's worth the wait. Recently it sped up a little so I'm pretty happy. I'm very happy today :)

Jaydenn. You're the cutest, most adorable, little brother ever. I was grinning like crazy when I read Drake's part. It's so cute, sibling love. It kinda reminds me of my brother and I. He can be brutal sometimes but..yeah. That's all he is ._. Sometimes, when I read a guy's POV, my chest tightens up. Mostly because guys aren't girls and they see things differently. It's kinda touching actually. Well I hope Jayden is extra sweet and comforts me. And Alex will be all jealous boo xD THE COMING TOGETHER OF THE TWO SERIES :DD I'm so excited. I hope the next part will come out fast. Then Jayden can hug me. I love how he's all that confident but when he hears the cries of a girl he becomes all shay and nervous.

I love Jayden. I love Alex. They should totally meet. And Alex shouldn't have ever left. He's drifting away D: And made his girl cry D': Well I wouldn't mind if Jayden is a rapist ._.

plzz come back its killing me inside!

COME BACKK!!! D: