The Unforgiven and Unforgotten part 30 | Comments

YAY!! YOU'RE BACK!! :D.

But what the heck was that?! I'm mad at you for the ending, but i admire the cliffhanger :P. You better not take too long in getting the next part out, or I'm gonna find out where you live, and force you to write it.

Oh, and about Shane's confession: I personally probably wouldn't have acted like that. As long as Shane wasn't the one who killed my parents, then I don't think it's fair to hold something against someone who didn't do anything wrong. He couldn't control which side he was born on.

.... I still want Jayden.

I would very much appreciate it if you came on :\. I miss your amazing writing. I think I'm now going to torture myself by reading this whole story over again and falling in love with Jayden again, only to read the words in which you said I can't have him. And then maybe (probably not though) I'll come to terms with the fact that you're not here to write more of your lovely story.

I was so happy when I saw this on the new quizzes list! Yeah, it's been a while but you came back and that's what counts. ^.^

I agree with DaughterOfApollo; Shane shouldn't be blamed for being born on the side he's in. I felt bad for him, knowing that he knows that the MC is mad at him. And Luka's supposed to be her cousin or something? O.o That's unexpected. I would have liked more of Jayden, too. It's weird seeing him different than his usual self. :(

Please post the next part soon. I can't wait to read a story from one of my favourite GTQ writer!

Jayden and Omar are my favorite. Later on you should make them go out and go dancing. Like later when Shane and _____ make up. Everyone needs a little fun in their life. Even in a situation like this.

Hello did you ditch or something because I am tired of all these people not finishing there story.

You can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that! Come write the next part