Never Forgotten | Comments

Not bad, it's a bit predictable but it looks okay. Is it going to be like a werewolf kind of thing? I prefer werewolves over vampires any day, so I'll probably read it. My only advice is to try and add something no one else has done before. The orphan thing has been done, the alley way thing's been done, the staring into eyes thing has been done to death, the only new thing that was there was the going to bed naked part (a bit weird but your explaination made sense). So I like this, I really do, it's just the same old song and dance at the moment. Although I'm sure you'll add something new and exciting, you've got the talent, so all in all good job.

I liked the quiz. I'm not the kind of person who advertises about their quizzes in the comments, but you should take my quiz, Wolf Boys part 1. I just think it's sort of like this one, so you would like it. I luv wolves too!!!

I like this quiz, can't wait for part 2!!!!! And please read my friend's quiz series, If You Follow a Rabbit!

I think it's pretty good, excited for part 2. :)

OMG Love it! It's so intersting you said in my series that you were doing your own so I thought I'd cheak yours out! I would say somthing like "PART 2!!" But you got like 13 more so Im happy!:D

@Missy Prissy Cat- Part three in my quiz is out ! =P

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