Make it a Dream | Comments

Michael :) This is great for a first time. A bit cliche but in all, it's beautifully original and I loove all the guys. Michael's cute, goofy and a great best friend. I do wonder why he doesn't have a girlfriends. Glittering blue eyes....naturally tan skin. It was a bit confusing in the Matthew part since I had no idea who he was and I thought you got confused between Michael and Matthew. Then I thought Matthew was mystery guy. But then he's not. I wonder who the mystery guy is ;) Keep it up for part 2.

Omg. Really cool and interesting...too good for a first time. I love all the guys and I'm stuck :P hopefully, the next part helps me decide :D

Hope you continue :3
You are a pretty goood writer! :o
Part 2! ^___^

Can't wait for part 2!