Life and Love at Hogwarts part 1 | Comments
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Alright! Well, I liked it. For a first quiz, this was seriously good. You've built up a good plot to begin with, and an interesting back-story for the character. I look forward to seeing who exactly Cousin John is, and a little more about 'my' past. On that note, I liked how I wasn't bombarded with information in the first part -- too many writers seem to list things about their character to begin with. I would have liked to know how I'm friends with Hermione and Ron but not Harry, but I suppose I'll find out later!
A little tip -- don't get so caught up in the plot that you let your writing style slip. The majority of this was pretty clean grammar-wise (warning: I am a grammar Nazi!), but you lost it a little bit in question 5. Just a little thing.
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You all is awesome! And aadee I will add Cedric too, although sorry to say that I'm not a huge Diggory fan. Sorry, but I won't have 'you' be mean to him or him to you. And thanks Stormwolf you guys really help me out!
Blahh451 -
Yes, this was really great.
And please consider Cedric Diggory as an option for boys.
aadee1 -
Hey this quiz was great even if it was short. Please continue this sires and your other one. :-)
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LOL, @kitty robot
Blahh451 -
Love it!
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I'm nice
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loved it!!!
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