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@hp4evr Aaron doesn't completely disappear. I just meant I honestly forgot he was at the Manor too, and had to do a quick revise by sending him on his way to the cottage as well. He'll be back in either the next edition or Part 52. :) Anyway, I had planned on staying at Hogwarts for seventh year since the beginning, but then I thought about how I would fit the other guys in as well, so off to Malfoy Manor it was. XD
As far as the deaths, I actually appreciated the fact that Rowling showed that not all heroes live in stories. Snape's death was very fitting, and by the end of his story in the book, I never thought of him the same way again. I agree they didn't even begin to do that justice in the movie. It was a huge turning point and one of the parts I had been looking forward to the most, but I think they thought it was a better idea to focus on all of the big battle scenes that really weren't that important.
Anywa y, thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the next parts! :)
music8261 -
I agree with everything hp4evr has said. Your writing style is fantastic, and it certainly draws me into what I'm reading. I must say, your portrayal of what happened to Cassandra and co. at Hogwarts was very good, despite being cut slightly short as you're pressed for time. The whole fiasco of being captured by Death Eaters and being held at Malfoy Mannor after her grandparents deaths flowed very smoothly, and was very well played out. Really good job!
You did indeed portray Bellatrix well, true to her oh-so-evil self. Fantastic! I can't wait to see how you end up writing the Battle of Hogwarts, and the very end. I'll be interested to see how you write Ron's and Harry's ending, and where you put Hermione and Ginny.
I can't wait for the next part, and from the sound of it, I won't have to wait long!
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@vulturemonem Thank you! I had to modify a lot of seventh year to save time and I was worried it wasn't going to turn out well, so it's great to hear that. The grandparents were always going to die, but I thought this way it was more significant to the story than Cassandra just hearing about it and moving on.
Bellatrix isn't a very deep, mysterious character, but sometimes they're the most fun characters to portray. She's just flat-out sadistic and crazy, and someone you can hate throughout the entire story. Anyway, as far as the endings, I have to say they were the hardest pieces to write of the entire story. But I guess you'll see how they turned out later on. :)
And yes, I will be posting two editions a day until the very last one. I have them all lined up to be posted, so all I have to do is click the buttons now. XD
music8261 -
This edition was the part about which I had always imagined even I before started writing my own series, and I'd say, you played it very well, though I might say, it oddly resembled my own imagination. :P And one thing, why does Aaron Levell just drops out of the story? :o I'd like to know more about him!
Anyway, you portrayed Bellatrix "wickedly" well, she's a psycho, and at first, it was pretty hard to believe she's Sirius's cousin. I know what's coming next. :( It was heart wrenching experience to read about Dobby's death, and I never understood why it was so necessary for Rowling to kill Fred. And Snape's ... It was even sadder and heart felt but they completely ruined Snape's awesome story in the movie. Ah well, five parts to go before this series comes to an end, and then we'll relive the moment when we read last HP book (I always hope and pray Rowling writes an eighth Harry Potter book).
hp4evr1 -
@music826 so three hours ago i began reading this. let me tell you that i didn't even get up to go to the bathroom. Your writing style is absolutely phenominal (is that how you spell it) anyways you are making me wish that this was my life. Seriously Draco should be the one Cassandra ends up with just saying. I mean Harry + Ginny and Ron + Hermione so hint hint. am i right. just kidding so i just wanted to congradulate you. Thanks for making my summer. Hope you get out part 51 soon. pls do i am so excited. eepp!!!
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But you'll have to agree, it was too much for my eleven year old self. :'( Though I can understand the writer's perspective on death, and I don't think I'll hesitate to kill people either in my story as well. XD
hp4evr1 -
like pls post part 51-the end right now and ill be the happiest 13 yr old ever thanks and keep it up
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