Hogwarts Love Story pt 28 | Comments

I completely agree, you have improved a lot and gone a long way, this coming from me as a reader. I only found your writing at the end of last year, along with Nat's so I had a shorter span of time to judge all of the writing. Though I think almost all the writers here started this way, including @natuhleegayle, even hers had plot holes in the beginning, and so did @HogwartsLove's, and both of them are amazing writers; there are exceptions still. Regarding this edition, I enjoyed and loved it, especially the details. If you didn't know, I prefer fat, juicy books, so I'm naturally drawn towards details. Also, I was literally laughing when I read "Toad-Lady". XD So funny! Besides being amazing, your writing also has humour and I believe in a few years, it would be matching J.K.R.'s.

I was so ecstatic to see this edition out on the new quizzes list today. Yes, you are following the book quite closely, but it's still an entertaining read. I've written so many comments today I've sort of run out of things to say, so I'll just leave it at the fact that I can't wait for part 29!